Wishing you were here

Im just wishing you were still here even though your far i still feel you near nothing can hurts as much as this loss i play it through my mind this was our last goobye no more smiles no more bright butterflies two hearts broke for what will last a lifetime and leave both of us wondering what we should have what we could be 

Well i'm just wishing you were here this night you and i looking up at the same starlit sky i just wanna be a puzzle piece of your life i dont wanna let you leave you mean too much for me to even think about letting you go you were my love and i wanted to let you know please let this wish come true the only thing i want is you here by my side kissing under this same night sky together forever to never let go 

Those beautiful bright blue eyes have a special story inside yet to be told so come and walk with me for just a bit you not gone yet your just growing sick of it bu before you concieve this defeat i will make you belive in me lets sit here on this beach watch as the waves crash on the winedark sea we are cuddling together this moment in time stands still your laughing and looking at me fondly now i know i made you belive

we only have so much time before you gotta leave lets make the most never glance back on what we both could have had

Well i'm just wishing you were here this night you and i looking up at the same starlit sky i just wanna be a puzzle piece of your life i dont wanna let you leave you mean too much for me to even think about letting you go you were my love and i wanted to let you know please let this wish come true the only thing i want is you here by my side kissing under this same night sky together forever to never let go 

Your finnally here to hold close i knew i knew you coudlnt find it in your heart to let me go what you and i have is true so i want you to know that i fell for you a whole long time ago i love seeing your pretty smile you blush and cant take the compliment this is what our love is as she kisses my lips and i hold on to her lips i just cant let myself let go this is young love for the two of us too know

Author's Note

this was my first song i wrote in 6th grade i just wanted to share it

Reviews

[Alice]

You must of been a very mautre 6th grader. :D It seems like some thing a young adult would write. I like it a lot. It is wonderful wrote.

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[Call_Me_Miss_Imperfect]

I love this. It's sweet, and I like to write songs too :) which makes it more fun to read and enjoy! I know how it feels to not want to ever let go of that one person and you feel incomplete without them if they ever leave. Great job expressing yourself.
Excellent.


Ashley Rivers--Dream BIG and you'll win BIG:)