My Day Haiku Form 575

A day in my life.

My Day Haiku Form 575

Morning

red dawn morning cold = 5

hot coffee oatmeal breakfast = 7

go to work lazy = 5

Noon

sandwich time for lunch = 5

who took my turkey and ham = 7

lunch table big crowd = 5

Night

what is for supper = 5

oh no not more hot oatmeal = 7

watch the evening news. = 5

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Reviews

[Nusquam Esse]

I love the humor which bounces around in this piece. Great to see a haiku (or perhaps senryuu, since this is not about seasons. A very relatable piece which makes one smile. I like this! Especially the way you took 3 poems, built them around such a simple theme, and played them off each other; refreshing!