Afraid

Afraid

A Poem by ron

Afraid.

My heart beats softly,
afraid for it to say hello.

Afraid if I breathed,
you would turn away laughing,
or worse...pretending you loved me.

© 2017 ron


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I like the short and sweet image you create with a few words. That is the power of expression.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Gentle, soft and hard words to write and think. Thank you Ron for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Nicely worded. Keep it up

Posted 7 Years Ago


ron

7 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm trying to.
I think fear stems from higher expectations! Loved it!

Posted 7 Years Ago


ron

7 Years Ago

Thank you.
You could be right.
This broke down my heart's wall immediately as I related to it so much bravo chere

Posted 7 Years Ago


ron

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
beautiful poem says so much in so few words. well written

Posted 7 Years Ago


ron

7 Years Ago

Thank you so much.
This is beautiful! As your words always are

Posted 7 Years Ago


ron

7 Years Ago

Thank you Ivory.
Your poem is well thought out, and full of emotion.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Either way, the heart has been stirred and when stirred all we can do is leap and take that chance. Some things are worth the risk, I think and if we never take a risk the heart will forever ask for clarification, better to know :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


ron

7 Years Ago

Thank you. I agree.
Lovely, simply lovely. It was rather meaningful, I really enjoyed it, though the last line's tense was a bit off nonetheless it was still lovely.

Posted 7 Years Ago


ron

7 Years Ago

Thank you.

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Imperial, CA



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I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..

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