When we write

When we write

A Poem by ron
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To a dear friend who I have written with before.

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When we write

 



 

Writing with you is like making love with words.

 

My heart beats faster,

 my breath ragged,

my imagination takes me where only your words can.

 

When I close my eyes your words caress my body,

they send electric sensations throughout my mind.

 

I lick my lips pretending that your words,

are kissing me softly.

 

Your pen touches my body and writes upon it,

and for a moment while I read your words,

I can almost smell your scent.

 

I wish my words could make you feel the same as yours does to me.

© 2015 ron


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This was very well written. I thoroughly enjoyed your use of vocabulary!

- Brittney

Posted 9 Years Ago


ron

9 Years Ago

Thank you very much Brittney.
613

9 Years Ago

You're welcome!
Well whoever this person is sounds like someone that is fun to write with. I am sure that person feels the same way. Writing with other people can be fun. Sometimes certain people just have a connection when they write that goes beyond words. Great write =)

Posted 9 Years Ago


ron

9 Years Ago

Thank you Manda. Yes they are fun to write with.
I hope so.

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I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..

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