A poem to my Juliet

This is for my love whose father would not allow us to be together.

A poem to my Juliet

 

 

Dear Juliet my heart and soul,

feels empty and void of life without you.

 

You made it beat,

you showed me what love could feel like,

after I was again thrown in darkness before we loved each other.

 

Now because of your fathers wish and command,

we can never be together.

 

How I love my Juliet until the day I die,

and now this day seems like the last I will ever know,

or want in life.

 

With metaphorical blade,

I cut my wrist and watch my life drain away.

 

I would cut out my heart,

but it will forever belong to you.

 

My dear Juliet,

sweet loving Juliet.

 

Each breath I take are like daggers in my heart,

each waking hour with you not here,

are unbearable to endure. 

 

Each moment I live without you,

kills me a little more each day.

 

Juliet sweet Juliet,

please I beg you,

never forget me,

never forget that you put a piece of my heart next to yours,

and forever it will lay.

 

Tonight and every night I will cry the tears of death,

I will die until we are together.

Author's Note

Reviews

[s y e]

Sorry about this Ron. :(
That sucks. Hope all will be okay soon.

[ron]

Thank you Sye. Maybe one day.

[MandaBear]

This feels like something Romeo would write to his Juliet before he kills himself. Really deep poem. Loved it =)

[ron]

Thank you Manda =)

[...]

There's a deep agonizing longing in this beautiful cry. Love is a very powerful energy. Thank you for sharing yours, dear poet

[ron]

Thank you Lynn for your kind words.

[Jamestown]

Beautiful write! I can feel your longing for her, so sweet and honest.
Thanks for sharing and keep up the good work!
Thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[ron]

Thank you again James.

[Nadia]

The agony of love taken away from you. A sweet work of art for letting her know how you feel.
(unbearable to bare.....unbearable to bear? Still, using the same word twice in one line.....maybe it could be unbearable to endure?)
Thanks for sharing.

[ron]

Thank you. Ill see if it works.

[MsJewel]

never forget that you put a piece of my heart next to yours,
and forever it will lay - such a beautiful line - I wish I had written it!
I can feel the longing in your words
so beautifully soft and romantic.
:) Julie

[ron]

Thank you Julie. You write such beautiful poems, I could never write as well as you.