You took my heart

You took my heart

 

 

 

You took my heart by storm,

and showed me how to love again.

 

You made it sigh, flutter, and breathe,

you showed me how to feel,

and recite the words of love.

 

You took your love and placed it at my feet,

now I bow to you each and every night.

 

For a love without you is nothing more than,

an empty shell.

 

I will forever love you,

and in my heart you helped the wall,

transform from stone to love.

 

A garden once dead is full of life again,

full of colors and scents,

full of feelings of love and not regret.

 

For this is the gift you gave me,

I am forever in your debt. 

Reviews

[s y e]

Truly, truly beautiful Ron. Someone having that affect and managing to help open your heart should be proud; we don't tend to open our hearts once it has been broken a few times.

[ron]

Thank you Sye.
Yes it is hard to open up again.

[MandaBear]

Awww such a sweet poem. This would melt even the coldest of hearts. Such love pouring out. Great poem

[ron]

Thank you Manda.
I have a feeling the one this was meant for will never see it :(

[MandaBear]

Awww. Well I saw it and I thought it was lovely

[ron]

Thank you Manda xoxo

[MandaBear]

No Problem my good sir

[Fran Marie]

Lots of love expressed within this lovely piece..so well done!

[ron]

Thank you Fran. It means a lot to me.

[Jamestown]

Great piece of work, wording and flow flawless. Thanks for sharing and b-blessed.

[ron]

Thank you James. I'm so glade you liked it.

[Jamestown]

Absolutely, thank you!

[Carol Phelan Aebby]

A lovely write of seeds of love sown and now blossoming in all colors.

Wishing you creativity asnd bliss!

With respect and smiles,
Carol Phelan Aebby

[ron]

Aww that's so sweet Carol. Thank you so much.

[GreenEyedPoet]

Beautifully written, I really like this!
I love this part - I will forever love you, and in my heart you helped the wall, transform from stone to love.

[ron]

Thank you so much.
Ya that part just kind of jumped out at me when I wrote it.

[GreenEyedPoet]

I love when that happens lol.

[ron]

I do to, it is a gift that makes us feel warm, complete, somehow understood. If that makes sense.

[GreenEyedPoet]

It does make sense.

[ron]

Thank you for seeing it. A lot of people don't see it.