Let her go

Let her go

 

 

Love comes slow,

love comes when it wants to show.

 

Love in the turbulence of passion,

be what it is in the night when…

you miss the touch,

the kisses,

all of what it is and feels like,

all of what it love is.

 

Take my heart into the dark,

it will shine,

so you can see.

 

Would you feel low now that you know,

that I love you?

Author's Note

Reviews

[Fenix Flight]

This longing and love is so strong in this! Well done! I've always loved reading your love poems. They are always simply beautiful and true, this one is no exception! I loved it!!!

[ron]

Thank you Fenix.
I always enjoy when you visit.

[Yours Truly]

Beautiful write.. love the way you ended this one. Enjoyed reading very much, thank you for sharing. :)
-Yours Truly

[ron]

Thank you Truly. :)

[BL]

A well crafted love poem, full of hope and promise. The uncertainty of the relationship gives this a very real edge. Your simple message is strong and clear.

[ron]

Thank you Bluely.

[shadow charm]

I did notice every written you have..words written that are full of love..=)

[ron]

Most are about love. Thank you..=)

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem. True and honest thoughts and wisdom.
"Love comes slow,
love comes when it wants to show."
Above lines are true. I tell the young people. Slow and easy. Make every moment worthwhile and precious. Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[ron]

Thank you Coyote.
It is my passion, love, and desire.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.