Nothing

Nothing



Not time nor distance,
could fill the void,
that separates us.

Not a moment lost,
could be regained.

Our hearts one,
yet they are separated,
by the pain of loneliness.

How could love bring us together,
and allow a simple desire,
keep us apart?

Reviews

[AprilRN1210]

well Ron, this one is short, yet deep and moving.. definitely tugs on the heartstrings you do so well.. makes the reader's heart go out to the speaker.. does feel a little contradictory but overall effective..

[ron]

Thank you April. A lot of jumbled emotions in this one. Not sure how it was going to come out.
Just where I'm at right now.

[ron]

Thank you April. A lot of jumbled emotions in this one. Not sure how it was going to come out.
Just where I'm at right now.

[AprilRN1210]

I can understand and respect that.. we all feel like that sometimes.. ((hugs)) to you my sweet friend.
you're quite welcome.

[ron]

Thank you April ((hugs)) back.