Somethin bout to happen

Somethin bout to happen

 

 

 

Stand back; about to explode with a verse or two...

Could you look better if you were wrapped in my love?

 

Money in my hands,

hand over fist.

 

In the bayou,

you took my love and buried it deep.

 

Now a hurricane bout to happen in my heart,

tornado took it to the surface.

 

Stand back girl…

my heart rules my body not your whims.

 

Take a breath in and smell what passion is in the moonlight over the swamp.

Take your hurricane parties and times it by twelve,

that’s my love in the dark.

 

Take my love into the light,

you might see who I am.

 

Take your hurricane of love and put it on hold.

You got nothen on what passionate love feels like.

 

Take hold my hand and don’t let go,

let’s take this ride to the end,

take it to the shooting star that trails a comet.

 

Take it as far as you can,

and give it some more.

 

That’s where I am,

tearing it up in New Orleans. 

Author's Note

Reviews

[s y e]

Wow Ron, the emotion in this poem is really out of this world, I cannot tell you how much this poem is ringing truth... great job, my friend.


I think in the title you mean "somethin" not "somethan" ???

[ron]

Thank you Sye
omg I forgot about this one, I was drunk when I wrote and posted it. I barely remember it.
It sounds kind of silly lol.

[s y e]

Haha, it was only 5 days ago, silly! You're memory is worse than mine, teehee!

[ron]

Lol see what drinking and writing will do to you :)

[s y e]

So in future, stay away from a pen when you're drinking... Yeah, that won't ever happen!

[ron]

lol.......