Ballroom Blitz

OK so ya the name of the poem is the name of the song...what do you want from me I'm drinking. wireweed captcha

Ballroom Blitz

 

 

Ready?

 

And in the heat of the moment you whisper in my ear…

“Let’s sneak off and continue this under the bleachers.”

 

Ooo baby my dreams come true.

 

Under the bleachers we hug and kisssss…

YESSSS KISSSSSS.

 

Ooo baby my dreams ready to come true.

 

Your body feels hot against mine,

your lips…OMG I’m almost in Heaven.

 

Just a little more…

”please God I won’t ask for anything else,

if you just grant me this one wish.”

 

Your hands move down lower,

“please baby lower…PLEEEase.”

 

I’m almost there,

all most.

 

My hands start to move lower…

mmm yes lower please let me have just one more inch.

 

Suddenly you pull away,

stand up,

slap me and proclaim,

“I’m not one of those kinds of girls.

 

You turn around and walk out of my life.

 

So this is what a ballroom blitz feels like.

 

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

I had a girl do this to me...totally came on to me....and of course I couldn't imagine why she would...

but then she stopped me....and I did...but then got accused of being a sex maniac....wasn't on the front page of the paper the next day...but still hurt....

this brings me back...stings a bit...that makes it really good if we can relate to it.

[ron]

Ouch. Sorry Jacob.

[Lyn Anderson]

Ha! And to that tune. I was sure I never knew you in high school, but then again ...:)

[ron]

Oh you steal my heart KL. you didn't know me in High School...I was the guy who wanted you most ;)

[Frieda P]

That'll teach ya to grandstand...funny & captcha knows all! ;)

[ron]

Grandstand? Whos grandstanding? Lol. Thank you Frieda.

[Frieda P]

Ha I just ASSUMED ;)

[ron]

I was just having fun :(
:) BALLROOM BLITZ.....................................

[Frieda P]

Or were trying. ;)

[ron]

Who MEEEEEEEEEEEE ;)

[ron]

I have no idea what your talking about.

[Frieda P]

I love it when you play dumb. ;)

[ron]

Play dumb?

[Frieda P]

Go back to drinking Ron...ha

[ron]

Never mind I got it.

[ron]

I wrote this one while I was drinking ;)
But if you insist I will ;)

[Frieda P]

About damned time....geez no wonder you didn't get laid in high school haha

[ron]

Sad but true...I'm just a drunk.

[Frieda P]

Oh stop, you must be one of those sad sack drunks...cheers, now smile. :)

[ron]

Yes I am :)

[Konigin]

hahhahahahhahahahhahaha This is such a cute quirky piece. I LOVED IT RON!!

[ron]

Thank you Chelsea. I am very glad you liked it ;)

[Konigin]

Welcome!!! :D

[Vidya Bacchus]

Haha this is funny.Don't know if it was meant to be but it was.Loved this Red :)

[ron]

It was a fun piece I did and yes it was meant to be funny ;)))

[Vidya Bacchus]

Okay ...you are welcome :)

[AprilRN1210]

fun, flirty, playful tale that had me giggling.. nice imagery that increased in intensity to a brilliant finish.. well done.. I enjoyed..

[ron]

LOL I'm glade I could make you giggle.

[NoelHC]

Ha, ha! Been there, also didn't do that! Good one, Ron!

[ron]

Thank you Noel. Just so you know I never got the chance to go under the bleachers with anyone. But if I did this poem is what probably would have taken place.