And in the Moonlight of your love

And in the Moonlight of your love

 

 

Your smile…how it shines,

in the moon light.

 

Your touch upon my heart,

could never be more beautiful.

 

The breath of you,

as our hearts beat to match the rhythm of the ocean.

 

You are the lighthouse that guides me to,

your love.

 

Upon rocky shores I would crash,

if not for your love,

that guides me safely to your harbor.  

Reviews

[curvygirlrock]

great job ron . your poem brought tears to my eyes for it creates strong emotion in the reader

[ron]

Thank you so much. I'm glad it touched you.

[Ruth]

Ah, soft and tenderly expressed, beautiful hon...a delight to read x

[ron]

Aww thank you Ruth xo

[redflutterby]

This is beautiful Ron...love the lighthouse line! We should all be a safe haven for the one we love!

[ron]

Aww thank you Red. I'm very happy you visited, I have missed you I hope everything is good with you.
Yes it's nice to have a safe haven for our hearts.

[redflutterby]

Im around now and then...hope youre doing well.

[ron]

I'm doing good. Just posted Ballroom Blitz :)

[Frieda P]

I love this romantic side of you Ron, safe harbors are what love it all about, when we find that peaceful place to fall within another, it's pure bliss...

[ron]

Thank you Frieda. I have my moments...shh don't tell anyone :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is lovely Red.It touches the heart with its sweetness :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya.

[Sheila Kline]

Absolutely one of my favorite poems of yours Ron! The romance in it guides love to the lighthouse underneath the moonlight where one is safely gathered in......a very soft and lovely collection of words which soothe like a drape of velvet flowing from a heart of love!

[ron]

Thank you Sheila.
"soothe like a drape of velvet flowing from a heart of love".
Now that is a poem in the making if I ever heard one.

[ron]

So I guess that means I'm coming along as a poet ;)

[Sheila Kline]

Oh yes...............this is really beautiful!! Please feel free to use the line for a poem........

[ron]

Thank you Sheila. It's already on my list ;)

[Sheila Kline]

I look forward to reading it when it is completed!!

[ron]

I will do my best sweet friend xoxo

[Lyn Anderson]

Very nice, Ron, a soft romantic kiss of a poem.

[ron]

Thank you KL.
guess I'm just in that kind of mood right now.

[AprilRN1210]

another sweet, romantic, lovely poem Ron, that shows just how big your heart is and how deeply you connect with others... it is beautiful..


one side note** did you mean "breath"?

[ron]

Thank you April :) xo
Your right I meant breath. That word id like there and their to me lol.

[AprilRN1210]

I have a few of mine own that I scratch my head on.. don't we all.. :)
you're welcome