The journey

The journey

A Poem by ron

The journey

 



 

Into the future,

along the path set before me,

I must travel.

 

Love…

how it cuts and heals.

 

My heart breaks in the sunset of a relationship,

and be reborn upon the sunrise of another.

 

Let the tears of lost love,

heal my heart when new love blossoms.

 

Let not the sunset burn my soul,

let new love save me from my darkness.

 

Let soft caressing hearts tear down,

these walls.

 

Could your love save me in my time of darkness,

could a chance for love,

heal these wounds that have cut and bled these many years?

 

The moon shall show love in the,

darkness of my pain.

 

Would you be the seed that makes the rose in my heart bloom,

in the moonlight that never took a chance?

 

Would your love look past my perfect,

imperfections?

 

Could it heal the wounds that remain,

and bleed…?

 

Would you my dear sweet kitten,

could you be strong enough?

 

© 2014 ron


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Gorgeous work ron...you've covered all the bases in terms of all the stages that love takes us through, especially the insecurities that a potential new love brings...

Would you be the seed that makes the rose in my heart bloom,
in the moonlight that never took a chance?...phenomenal lines...I love how you worked the sun metaphor as well...you've spoken for all of us with this one my friend...nicely done.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Wow thank you KK. Your review warms my heart.
this is such a sweet poem. The love it puts a smile on my face :-D. Very well written. I hope she loves it too :-D

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Aww thank you Fenix. You are very sweet.
Aww your "dear sweet kitten" will surely hear your plea.Awesome pen buddy ;-)

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Vidya. I hope she does.
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome.She will :)

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Added on September 8, 2014
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Imperial, CA



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I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..

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