I beg of you

I beg of you

 

 

 

Could you breathe me in,

while I breathed you in?

 

I would take all of you,

feel your hand on my shoulders,

while you whispered…

“I love you”.

 

Look into my eyes and kiss me,

drink in my kiss.

 

Make me your drink of water,

drink me as if you were dying of thirst.

 

I wish I could be the smile in your heart…

does it know and feel my love?

 

I want you to love me,

love me with your heart.

 

How could I breathe without your love,

how could my heart beat without yours?

 

 

Take me now…

take me for I am broken and need so much.

 

I am so lost without you,

Reviews

[Frieda P]

Deep emotions drip here, almost leaning towards desperation ron....some days it feels as such.

[ron]

Thank you Frieda.
Ya I guess it does at that.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

Very deep indeed.
Another romantic write huh :P
Any lucky girl in particular you are writing about? If so I hope you have shown her this poem.
Its beautiful :)
Great job

[ron]

Thank you.
No just wishful thinking I guess.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

I know someday, you will have someone to write about. :)
your welcome :)

[ron]

That's the story of my life...one day.

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

don't loose hope. theres someone out there for everyone trust me :)

[ron]

I know. Thank you. xoxo

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

you are welcome once again :)

[AnnD]

I love this it speaks to me, I love that it is almost a poem that speaks of a familiar longing

[ron]

Thank you. What would you call it if not a poem? Just wondering.

[AnnD]

Oh I miss spoke it is certainly a poem, however I can hear almost a musical vibration to it could be a love ballad. Trust me I love it, read it multiple times

[ron]

That's ok. I'm not always the sharpest one in the room.
You are very nice to say that thank you very much.

[Vidya Bacchus]

This was another beautiful plea to a beloved.Most excellent lines my dear friend .I think you meant "thirst" in the tenth line Red :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya.
I will correct it.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Okay.You are welcome .