Rebuilt walls

Rebuilt walls

A Poem by ron

Rebuilt walls

 


 

When the love of two people is not acceptable by another,

walls will be rebuilt stronger than before.

 

Yet these new walls will harbor love,

never to be tasted by the other.

 

The smallest cracks will be sealed tight,

no light allowed to shine in.

 

Darkness will be the only comfort allowed,

no sounds heard by passion,

no tender touch felt by desire,

no soft kisses whispered upon sweet lips.

 

Just the cold wind of love,

not allowed to be shared.

 

Sometimes love comes at a price,

for no matter how strong the love,

it may be best to rebuild the walls,

so that families,

will not break.

© 2014 ron


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Very sad but so it goes in life.The pain does go away eventually be strong buddy :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

I know and thank you Vidya xo
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You are welcome :-)
WOAH
You tore my heart out with this one Ron. :/ I hope that everything is okay and I hope that you feel better...
BUT IT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO frickin good.
Superb pen my friend! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

I don't know Chelsea. But thank you.
Konigin

10 Years Ago

Welcome. I am here if you need me. :)
ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Chelsea.
OMG Ron, I wanna cry and give you the biggest hug in the whole history of hugs. :( My heart is breaking for you right now my sweetest friend. Keep your chin up and be strong. I am sorry you're going through this.


Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sye...ok.
s y e

10 Years Ago

BIG HUGGGGGSSSSS!!!
ron

10 Years Ago

You are very sweet Sye.
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Been there did that, I get this one Ron. Well written. Be strong, buddy.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Noel. I appreciate your kind words and support.
Oh Ron, this is heartbreaking. Sometimes, we need to let the one we love go so either you or she can cope. Sometimes it's just not meant to be. I'm sorry, this one broke my heart. :((

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Not beating my self up.
Kayleigh

10 Years Ago

Ok good. Remember, message me if you need.
ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you and I will.

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