I sleep inside of your heart

I sleep inside of your heart

 

 

You took your time,

to tear down my walls,

I never saw you coming.

 

A friendly hello,

as you worked on the crack,

the crack I never noticed before.

 

Then a soft kiss on the cheek of my heart,

the right kiss will do that sometimes.

 

You stayed with me like my shadow at mid-day,

always talking and smiling,

you taught me it was OK to cry.

 

You took me by the hand,

and showed me what love could feel like.

 

You took down enough of my wall,

to allow me to sleep,

inside your heart.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

that is how i have felt the past few years....someone in my life took down my walls...trust, comfort, intensity...acceptance.

[ron]

Thank you Jacob. It was the same for me in a way.

[Kayleigh]

Oh la la, this is sweet and romantic. Your lady is very lucky Ron, you have a lovely heart from what I've gathered from your poetry. Beautiful, beautiful poem.

[ron]

-blushing- Thank you Kayleigh, you are so very kind in your words ;) xo

[Anika Morris]

Lovely poem, Its great feeling finding someone that takes the time to love us despite our flaws.

[ron]

Thank you Anika. Yes it is.

[R Smith]

A beautiful write ron, defining love at its simplest and best, one for my library, thank you.

[ron]

Wow, thank you Richard for your kind words. I am honored to be a page in your library.

[R Smith]

your welcome, looking forward to reading more of your work.

[ron]

Thank you Richard, I feel honored.

[just Penny]

You use a nice technique here with recurrence of the opening and closing lines while taking me on a journey of romance in between which unfolds like fresh petals. A lovely write. Penny

[ron]

Thank you Penny you are very kind.

[Frieda P]

Nothing like a safe harbor for the pain and somewhere you can lay your heart where it feels at home...I
love this one ron...

[ron]

So very true Fried. Thank you.

[Coyote Poetry]

A beautiful and gentle flow of thoughts for love. Love is tenderness and concern. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[ron]

Thank you and you are most welcome Coyote.
I will visit some of your writing soon I promise.

[Sreenath]

the beautiful set of words which could describe the emotions that involved in love. lovely composed right.
enjoyed reading it ... peace :)

[ron]

Thank you shree.

[Aprille]

I love this poem so much.. the words are simple, precise, lovely and kind. :)

[ron]

Aww thank you so much :)

[Aprille]

You're welcome. :)

[AprilRN1210]

This is absolutely beautiful.. I love everything about this.. you poured your heart out on this page for all to see.. I love this tender honestly that you have portrayed here.. One of my favorites for sure..

[ron]

Aww thank you April you are very kind to say.