As you kiss my heart

As you kiss my heart

 

 

Your words have kissed my heart,

your lips pressed against my soul,

your eyes ignite my passion.

 

A whisper from your sweet lips,

would shake my foundation.

 

Play not with my heart,

lest I crumble like an empire in ruins.

 

Take from the ashes all that I have to offer,

rebuild my shattered heart,

make me whole once more.

 

On bent and borrowed knee,

I place these shattered pieces of my heart,

in your loving hands.

 

This and all I am,

I entrust in you.

Reviews

[Deandra Dawn]

Beautiful and vulnerable. Laying your cards on the table and hoping.

[ron]

Thank you Dawn. Sometimes...but sometimes love is determined by more then the two people and even their love could not last.

[Lyn Anderson]

A very sweet romantic write.

[ron]

Thank you KL ;)

[stars are far]

That was very sweet and passionate, i loved it..
i actually love all poems related to kissing hehe, it reminds me of the good days i had hehe..
that was wonderful
well done x.x

[ron]

Thank you Stars. Yes I love the kissing thing to and everything about it, even the poems. Just not a lot of kissing poems :(

[s y e]

So sweet and romantic Ron... You are on quite a roll with your lovely poems. :) I loved this one, the last two lines just make it for me.

[ron]

Thank you Sye. You are very sweet to say so.

[Fenix Flight]

awww this is so sweet. the trust is so strong in this peice. Well done :-D as always I have loved reading your work :-D

[ron]

Thank you Fenix xoxo

[Fenix Flight]

Xoxoxoxoxo

[ron]

You are very sweet :) xoxo

[Fenix Flight]

shhhh dont let anyone else know LOL

[ron]

your secret is safe with me :)

[AprilRN1210]

yes, you are one of the gentlest, mushy romantic male souls I have had the pleasure of reading.. another awesome job, Ron..

brave step.. I wish you luck with this lady.. you deserve it..

[ron]

Thank you April. I wish this poem was going to run away with her heart...sighs...but it wont :(

[AprilRN1210]

you never know, Ron.. sometimes this type of writing melts women.. I admit, it doesn't me.. but I am frozen... Most women loooooove this sort of thing, so it just might speak to her heart and get you in there.. have you given it to her? has she read it.. well then you never know:)

[ron]

All I wanted to do was write something that made someone feel something.
She has read a lot of my writings...but she has other aspirations than my heart...
That is the way it always is.

[AprilRN1210]

yes, life is like that.. other aspirations than your heart?... well now that is intriguing... I hope you find what you are looking for my friend.. I admit, you have made me feel with a few of your pieces.. this type just isn't my cup of tea, sorry.. but it is a beautiful sentiment written with passion and feeling.. can't ask for more than that...

[ron]

You do me more justice then I deserve sweet poet.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

a lovely poetic way of expressing a plea...don't break my heart."lest i crumble like an empire in ruins"
which is a really nice line...like that, Ron.
jacob

[ron]

Why thank you Jacob. Another honored guest that has stopped bye. I feel blessed by your review.

[Enigmatic Amor]

What a beautiful poem full of some lovely imagery. Your progression from the passion to the repair of a broken heart is so poignant. This is a very beautiful write.

My only crit. would be that barrowed is a typo. I think you meant borrowed.

Very nicely written. Thank you for sharing.

[ron]

Thank you so very much. Your review is an honored one for me -blushing-
I was wondering about the typo, thank you I will change it :)
Again thank you for your time I am honored to receive your review.

[Enigmatic Amor]

I'm happy to read your work whenever you like. You have a way of expressing feelings that shows talent.

[ron]

Thank you so much...sighing

[Madalyn Beck]

This is beautiful, Ron. Sorry I went MIA for a while. I feel every now-and-then I need a break from this site.

This write is filled with raw passion, heat, desire, and above all else, love. You have etched your heart into this piece and left me breathless. Fantastic work! I've miss reading your work. xo :)

[ron]

Thank you Madalyn. I understand, sometimes we have to do what we have to, welcome back :))) xoxo.read moreThank you Madalyn. I understand, sometimes we have to do what we have to, welcome back :))) xoxo.
You are far to kind to this old and weary poet. But your words find me humbled and grateful.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh my god dude what a lovely pledge to your beloved.This is so beautifully written it touches deeply :)

[ron]

Wow...thank you Vidya :)
I always love your kind reviews xoxo

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yeah that's me Miz Kind lol.It was truly beautiful and you are welcome :)