Rebirth

Rebirth

 

 

My heart drifts in and out of love,

suspended by my soul.

 

Condensation of desires,

form on the wings of my passion.

 

Ecstasy ignites,

in a fiery birth.

 

Now…

Tempered by the icy cold,

of the past.

 

Upon virgin ground,

I reside in what was.

 

The past nothing more than shadows,

hiding in the light.

 

Call to me they will,

yet I have no answer to give.

 

How could I answer,

when love has died.

 

When passion is cold,

and desires; not even a faint glow of ember.

 

Condensation of desires,

form on the wings of my passion.

 

Ecstasy now ignites,

in a fiery rebirth.

 

Once again…

my heart has found love,

suspended by your soul.

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

This is really outstanding Ron, encompassing a nice range of emotions in a short piece. Great work.

[ron]

Thank you KL. I was playing around with using repetitive words. Just something new to play with ;)

[Frieda P]

I love the layering here, and the juxtaposition of your soul and hers...tender write ron...one of my favorites of yours.

[ron]

Aww thank you Frieda :) xo

[Sheila Kline]

Your words embrace the ethereal as you speak of desires and rebirth on the wings of passion. I especially like the flow of your thoughts and the repetition of certain words in the key phrases.......a very lovely and dreamy write!!

[ron]

Thank you so much Sheila.
How have you been sweet Lady?

[NoelHC]

I think you have spoken a deep truth here, our hearts may drift in and out of love, and we are more alive when we do have love to share with one that returns it. One of your more romantic pieces, well done.

[ron]

Thank you so much Noel. Yes we are.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh this is so lovely.Very awesome lines.Finding the one you are supposed to be with is a wonderful thing .They can bring you back to life so to speak.There is a difference between living life and just existing.Very nice poem Red :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. Yes it is ;) xo

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)