Caught in your breath

Caught in your breath

A Poem by ron

Caught in your breath



You exhaled,
and stole my heart.

© 2014 ron


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Your words used in this poem spark senses in the imagination.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
woah
Lovely
really and truly

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Chelsea. you are so kind.
Konigin

10 Years Ago

^///^ Welcome
Sigh...I adore this, the title and the sentiment is exquisite ron...bravo!

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Aww thank you Frieda xo
Frieda P

10 Years Ago

It's a perfect gem, my pleasure :) x
ron

10 Years Ago

You are very sweet xo thank you :)
This is gorgeous Ron, and shows how a lot can be said with a little. In the faves.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

-blushing- thank you again KL xo
Gosh...
What's worse? Stealing one's heart? Or stealing one breath?
This made me skip a little beat.
Short with a big boom.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Ance...:)
Short but impact-full. Bravo...:)........................

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Same...:)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

Muchly welcome...:)......................
Now that is cool.Really sweet and very awesome :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Vidya.
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Welcome :)

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ron

Imperial, CA



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I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..

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