Caught in your breath
A Poem by
ron
Caught in your breath
You exhaled,
and stole my heart.
© 2014 ron
Reviews
Your words used in this poem spark senses in the imagination.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you very much.
woah
Lovely
really and truly
Posted 10 Years Ago
woah
Lovely
really and truly
10 Years Ago
Thank you Chelsea. you are so kind.
10 Years Ago
^///^ Welcome
Sigh...I adore this, the title and the sentiment is exquisite ron...bravo!
Posted 10 Years Ago
Sigh...I adore this, the title and the sentiment is exquisite ron...bravo!
10 Years Ago
Aww thank you Frieda xo
10 Years Ago
It's a perfect gem, my pleasure :) x
10 Years Ago
You are very sweet xo thank you :)
This is gorgeous Ron, and shows how a lot can be said with a little. In the faves.
Posted 10 Years Ago
This is gorgeous Ron, and shows how a lot can be said with a little. In the faves.
10 Years Ago
-blushing- thank you again KL xo
Gosh...
What's worse? Stealing one's heart? Or stealing one breath?
This made me skip a little beat.
Short with a big boom.
Posted 10 Years Ago
Gosh...
What's worse? Stealing one's heart? Or stealing one breath?
This made me skip a little beat.
Short with a big boom.
10 Years Ago
Thank you Ance...:)
Short but impact-full. Bravo...:)........................
Posted 10 Years Ago
Short but impact-full. Bravo...:)........................
10 Years Ago
Thank you Same...:)
10 Years Ago
Muchly welcome...:)......................
Now that is cool.Really sweet and very awesome :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
Now that is cool.Really sweet and very awesome :)
10 Years Ago
Thank you Vidya.
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Added on July 5, 2014
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ron Imperial, CA
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I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic..
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