I can really relate to this poem! I'm always here for people, but some of them aren't there for me. The last line is very powerful : "it brightens my day when you, let me know I was not forgotten."
That last line brings the whole poem home, it shows how much you care about this person
Thanks for sharing
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you very mush Ally. I wasn't feeling my normal self when I wrote it.
I can relate to this so well, as you know. "it brightens my day when you,let me know I was not forgotten."
Yes, that. sometimes just a short text, or a like on something on Facebook, and for that we are thankful. Well written, Ron.
You shouldn't have to feel this way, Ron. If someone truly cares they wouldn't allow it to be this way. You should always be first on their mind the same way they should be first on yours. Love is when you can't get enough of them, when you think about them constantly, when you call just to hear their voice. It is someone who gets in your heart, your head, your soul. It should be your best friend, who is the first person you call when you have news.... You are an awesome person and deserve to be happy. I hope you know this..
Then they will keep taking advantage of that my friend.. harsh truth.. people treat you how you ALLO.. read moreThen they will keep taking advantage of that my friend.. harsh truth.. people treat you how you ALLOW them to..
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People have their own lives, and once in a while they drift away. If I don't wait for them, then I t.. read morePeople have their own lives, and once in a while they drift away. If I don't wait for them, then I tend to be forgotten. So I wait.
Oh my this is slightly sad.Life gets busy,our loved ones get busier and we find ourselves waiting for a minute of their time.I am sure you are never forgotten :)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you Vidya. Just waiting.
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You have a lot of patience.It is a joke in my family how much I hate waiting lol.
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It gets lonely but I still wait.
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Maybe you should let the other people wait for you sometimes hmm?
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That never works.
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Well you must not be at their beck and call and then they will wait lol
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If I make them wait they will leave.
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If they expect you to wait for them and are not willing to wait for you maybe they aren't who you th.. read moreIf they expect you to wait for them and are not willing to wait for you maybe they aren't who you think they are.
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I don't know if they are willing to wait. I never wanted to find out.
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Ignorance is bliss I hear and it seems to be true.You would rather wonder than actually know for sur.. read moreIgnorance is bliss I hear and it seems to be true.You would rather wonder than actually know for sure.What you don't know can't hurt you.I get it.
I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..