The beauty of you

The beauty of you

 

 

Soft dreams of your beating heart,

because you are there.

 

When I look at the stars I see your eyes,

mine are but a pale image.

 

The beauty of your soul,

brings me to my knees,

and lifts mine into the light.

 

For you the Angels called to Heaven and presented your beauty as a gift.

And the Heavens decreed that the Angels protect you and your heart.

 

And this is what Heaven spoke…

Her heart is pure and full of love,

let no Angel doubt this truth.

 

For in her heart lies the future of pure love,

if her heart breaks then love will fall,

into a thousand pieces,

and it will spend an eternity trying to find all that was lost. 

Author's Note

For a dear friend who is hurting. May she know that she is thought of with all the love a friend may offer.

Reviews

[Natalie Dieudonne]

The beauty of this poem is that its beautiful... just simply beautiful.

The beauty of your soul,
brings me to my knees,
and lifts mine into the light.

The depth in this line is amazing!

[ron]

Wow thank you very much.

[MagicAl]

Awe, beautiful wrote Ron.. your undying love for 'her' has been wonderfully portrayed.. :)

[ron]

Thank you so much Al :) xoxoxo

[Ruth]

A vision of purity indeed - beautifully done Ron x

[ron]

Thank you Ruth, you are very kind :)

[Lyn Anderson]

This is a very flowing, romantic piece Ron, and nary an apostrophe out of place.

[ron]

You are very kind. I am pleased I have no apostrophes out of place, I credit my mentor.

[Karen]

Very beautiful... I love the image of purity, Heaven and angels, and the threat of heartbreak that reverberates beyond the realm of human individuality and reaches the heights of heaven. Beautifully written!

[ron]

Wow thank you Karen. I get in my moods from time to time :)

[AprilRN1210]

I wish Angels would protect my heart... this is very nice Ron... good job..

[ron]

Thank you April, I think I hear the Angels...yup they said you where protected and I should over see the whole thing.

[AprilRN1210]

oh they did? why would they say that?

[Matching Socks]

If you don't stop writing these poems for me people are gonna get the wrong idea...

[ron]

Aww you are so sweet Ance...shh don't say anything...
Dont breathe, dont sigh...shh it will be ok.
You mean something like that?

[Matching Socks]

Lol!! Bang on.

[ron]

Your so cute Ance. xoxoxoxoxo

[Matching Socks]

Nice poem btw.

[ron]

Thank you.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awww this is so sweet and hauntingly beautiful.Another favorite of mine :)

[ron]

Aww thank you Vidya you are so sweet.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Maybe....maybe not.You are welcome :)

[ron]

You are very sweet.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You may think so but you may be wrong:)

[ron]

I could gather every one here and we could take a senescence of just how sweet you are..

[Vidya Bacchus]

Haha you think so?

[ron]

Ok you asked for it... :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh behave you mister are going to give me what I asked for ?

[ron]

Ask me for anything I might give it to you ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol.....You may yet regret those words Red ;)

[ron]

I don't think I will ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are way to trusting Mister.

[AprilRN1210]

oh jeez, looks like I missed out on all the fun...

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol....girl welcome to the party .Apparently I'm sweet and I beg to differ haha

[AprilRN1210]

poor thing he doesn't have a clue huh girl... difference between spicy and sweet.. lol

[ron]

Oh I know the difference between spicy and sweet...I just don't know how to explain it ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol....yes poor thing :)

[AprilRN1210]

yes ma'am...

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lordy ma'am makes me sound like a 100 eek!!!!!

[ron]

You asked for it...
As sweet as the morning blossoms caught in the mornings light, Honey Suckle wafted upon the air.
As I walk the Gardens path, I can feel love blossom in it's path.

My heart beats faster,
my lips parched and wanting.

Come to me my sweet love and taste my desires.

[AprilRN1210]

hey! I am a down home southern girl and say ma'am and sir to everyone.. I can't help it jeez... Young, old and everything in the middle... Doesn't represent age, it is a sign of respect..

[AprilRN1210]

Look at that girl, you get a poem within a poem... ooooooh weeeeee.

[ron]

More should say ye Ma'am no Ma'am and yes Sir and no Sir, as you said that is a sign of respect.
read moreMore should say ye Ma'am no Ma'am and yes Sir and no Sir, as you said that is a sign of respect.
I will give you a poem within a poem just for you sweet April.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol...just pulling your leg ma'am and oooh my what a lovely poem in my review.I wonder which one of us inspired these "sweet" lines lol, I'm sure he's forgotten he has a terrible memory :)

[AprilRN1210]

ok good girl wheeeew. Didn't want you to think it was in any negative way.. I am assuming it was you since he said you asked for it.. lol

[Vidya Bacchus]

I can't remember asking for it .Do you think I'm going senile anyways it was so very nice so maybe I should have asked for it lol

[AprilRN1210]

I dunno aren't you like eeeek 100... lol :P

[ron]

Ok that's not fair. I told you about my memory and now you mock me. I told you about it before you asked...but I guess it would have been better


If I did not hate you for the words you have posted.
I guess I deserved it...I'm pathetic at best.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Dude we were complimenting you .I said it was so nice silly billy.Yes girlie sigh I'm 99 just crawling to the 100 mark haha

[ron]

I hate my life.

[Vidya Bacchus]

What why would you hate your life when you have April and moi for company.There are many who would think that was cool.Did you just say you hate me!!!!!

[AprilRN1210]

ok, I am going to slowly back away... I don't know what just happened...

[Vidya Bacchus]

Girlie neither do I anyways he loves me so I'm not afraid of him lol