The beauty of you

The beauty of you

A Poem by ron

The beauty of you

 



 

Soft dreams of your beating heart,

because you are there.

 

When I look at the stars I see your eyes,

mine are but a pale image.

 

The beauty of your soul,

brings me to my knees,

and lifts mine into the light.

 

For you the Angels called to Heaven and presented your beauty as a gift.

And the Heavens decreed that the Angels protect you and your heart.

 

And this is what Heaven spoke…

Her heart is pure and full of love,

let no Angel doubt this truth.

 

For in her heart lies the future of pure love,

if her heart breaks then love will fall,

into a thousand pieces,

and it will spend an eternity trying to find all that was lost. 

© 2014 ron


Author's Note

ron
For a dear friend who is hurting. May she know that she is thought of with all the love a friend may offer.

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The beauty of this poem is that its beautiful... just simply beautiful.

The beauty of your soul,
brings me to my knees,
and lifts mine into the light.

The depth in this line is amazing!

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Wow thank you very much.
Awe, beautiful wrote Ron.. your undying love for 'her' has been wonderfully portrayed.. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Al :) xoxoxo
A vision of purity indeed - beautifully done Ron x

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Ruth, you are very kind :)
This is a very flowing, romantic piece Ron, and nary an apostrophe out of place.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

You are very kind. I am pleased I have no apostrophes out of place, I credit my mentor.
Very beautiful... I love the image of purity, Heaven and angels, and the threat of heartbreak that reverberates beyond the realm of human individuality and reaches the heights of heaven. Beautifully written!

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Wow thank you Karen. I get in my moods from time to time :)
I wish Angels would protect my heart... this is very nice Ron... good job..

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you April, I think I hear the Angels...yup they said you where protected and I should over see.. read more
AprilRN1210

10 Years Ago

oh they did? why would they say that?
If you don't stop writing these poems for me people are gonna get the wrong idea...

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Your so cute Ance. xoxoxoxoxo
Matching Socks

10 Years Ago

Nice poem btw.
ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you.
Awww this is so sweet and hauntingly beautiful.Another favorite of mine :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

What why would you hate your life when you have April and moi for company.There are many who would t.. read more
AprilRN1210

10 Years Ago

ok, I am going to slowly back away... I don't know what just happened...
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Girlie neither do I anyways he loves me so I'm not afraid of him lol

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