I need you more today

I need you more today

A Poem by ron

I need you more today

 


 

If you looked into my heart and soul,

you would see they are both crying.

 

The loneliness the emptiness,

it echoes through my body and mind.

 

The darkness of pain,

seeps in to claim it’s prize.

 

I have no will to fight,

I am not strong.

The pain has become my lifeline.

 

I willingly go and surrender my soul.

 

Please help me and take control.

Lead me back to your love,

where I will be safe in your arms,

wrapped in the blanket of your heart.

© 2014 ron


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Aww shucks but this is sad.It will never be easy to be away from the one you love nor should it be but still heartbreaking.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Cheer up hunny.You are welcome :)
ron

10 Years Ago

I am trying.
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

.................:)
I believe everyone can relate to this heartbreak...

It's the comfort that you miss the most...
get yourself out of the mind frame, my friend... she is not the only soft and warm blanket...

I felt the sad emotions in which you conveyed with honesty.. Well expressed, Ron!~xoxo~:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

It's that her and I have not met in person yet and we wont be able to for about two years (because o.. read more
Robbie~xoxo~

10 Years Ago

awwww...sigh....xx :)
Awh Ron, sounds like you're quite down today. I hope that things begin to look up for you and that your sunshine comes through soon. You're never alone.

This broke my heart but I know you will be fine. Keep your head up.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sye, you are very sweet.
Guess I'm need her more today.

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Imperial, CA



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I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..

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