The Altar of your body

The Altar of your body

 

 

I would treat your body as an Altar,

and bring it gifts.

 

Soft kisses and warm breathes,

laid upon every inch of your skin.

 

Deep massages,

while the moonlight cast the shadow of my body over yours.

 

Soft petals of roses laid upon your body,

like a blanket of love.

 

Whisper in my ear,

tell me how to please you.

 

For each night, for each moment,

I will treat your body as the…

Altar of my love.

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hmmmm now who would not want all that you have promised here? Your woman will be most pleased I am sure :)

[Enigmatic Amor]

I liked the idea of treating her body as an altar where you worship her. I think you have good flow in this piece and it is just the perfect length.

I think you meant to say massage rather than message....but maybe not. That sentence would fit better if it were massage, I think.

Nicely done.

[ron]

Thank you Enigmatic Amor.
You are right it would be better, I always get confused on how to spell massage. xo

[Enigmatic Amor]

I think we all have words that challenge us like that. Don't ever ask me to tell you the difference between affect and effect, lol. :-)

[ron]

Lol now my head hurts :)

[Fenix Flight]

Such a sweet and beautiful poem well done!!!!!!!!!

[ron]

Thank you so much Fenix. You are to kind xo

[s y e]

Hot damn! Oh la la, Ron this was romantic and sensual and oh so very beautiful! What a way to make your love swoon for you. The woman here are going to be falling off their seats!

[ron]

-blushing-
Oh stoop Sye :) you know they wont ;)
but thank you so very much.