So my heart beats

So my heart beats

A Poem by ron

So my heart beats

 

 

Taken in the rhythm of life,

in the rhythm of love.

 

Let the heart beat strong,

for in this, love will find its seed.

 

Let the night spread its life onto the seeds of love.

Let the breath of life feel this feeling.

 

Take time and share it,

with your lover.

 

Who is to say why we are meant to love,

no one, no one can.

 

Be in life what beats in your heart,

let your dreams beat what your life sees.

 

How can love grow,

how can feelings be felt?

 

Time will know in the end...

embrace time.

© 2014 ron


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Be in life what beats in your heart,
let your dreams beat what your life sees.

~~~ Very tender & so sexy lines ~~~ I love the beats of these words which pumped up like a pop-corn over the molten raged heart plates of yous .. this`s why I always come over your pages reading your beautiful writes. Great job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Wow thank you so very much Stephen -blushing-
Your review is poetry that beats in my heart.
This is so very nice Red.I loved every line as I usually do with your poems :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Tank you Vidya :)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Welcome :)
I love the whole poem but those last words echo with wisdom and truth.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you. Yes they can.
Ah Ron, I think your chirpy, romantic side is coming back to us. I think we were all a bit worried with your sad poems of late but glad to see you getting back into the swing of things! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


s y e

10 Years Ago

No need to apologise, writing is cathartic.
ron

10 Years Ago

You must forgive my ignorance but I don't know what "cathartic" means.
s y e

10 Years Ago

Providing psychological relief through the open expression of strong emotions; causing catharsis. it.. read more
Beautiful write!! The tale of love and letting it grow with time. Stunning, Ron!! I love this! (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Madalyn. Yes who is to say how it grows.

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