Taken in the moon light

Taken in the moon light

 

 

Take a deep breath,

sigh a little bit.

 

Calm your self in the hazy moonlight,

let the sun raise on your soul.

 

Shh my sweet love you will only hurt just a little,

take me into you, bring me into you soul.

 

The light will dim,

all feelings will be lite for all to see.

 

Dance with me in the midnight wine,

could you taste all there is to taste?

 

Could you let your heart beat on my chest?

-sighing-

 

Could you love me for who I am,

or will you run back to your life before me.

 

I am here for you pleasure,

for love,

for a moment of time.

 

We are connected in ways that the heart does not feel,

or am I mistaken?

Reviews

[Konigin]

Ron... Every single one of your recent poems have stolen my breath and refused to return it. They have drowned me int their beautiful emotions. They have stayed with me long after I have read thwm. They are powerful. Thery are potent. They are raw and heartfelt. They wongerous and fragile. They let me glimpse into your heart. They are astounding.

NEVER stop writing. Your gift shines brighter than the sun. I cherish every piece of you that you share here. You are an amazing person, a splendid friend.

Superb pen. Glorious reading as always/
^,^

[ron]

WOW you do me more justice then I deserve. Thank you so very much Chelsea. ::))

[Konigin]

No. I do not. It is nothing but blind and glaring truth. You are utmost welcome Ron. ^,^

[ron]

Well thank you so very much Chelsea...^,^

[Konigin]

You are welcome Ron. Really and truly. XD

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awwww another sweet one.This is truly lovely Red.I am sure that you are not mistaken :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. You are always so very sweet. xoxoxo

[Vidya Bacchus]

I just speak the truth.You are welcome :)

[s y e]

Wow, this is so romantic with so much longing and hope, passion and so much more. I really loved all of this, it is relatable.

Perfect write.

[ron]

Aww thank you Sye. You are so sweet. Yes it is all of it.