Loneliness

Loneliness

A Poem by ron

Loneliness

 

 

 

I feel the cold hand of loneliness slip in,

surrounded by your love,

yet time and distance makes it hard.

 

Sometimes I lie awake and close my eyes,

I reach for you...

 

My body cries to feel you next to me,

the way my heart does.

 

My lips burn to feel yours...

 

Running my finger over my lips I inhale.

How I wish it was your fingers caressing my lips.

 

I long to fall asleep feeling your heart beating beneath my hand,

reassuring that mine still beats.

 

I will bottle my tears of love,

and keep them safe until you are here.

 

I have no doubt you believe our love for each other is real,

it’s just that loneliness makes the bed cold.

 

Until we meet at a time we both agreed on,

know that my love for you will not falter.

© 2014 ron


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This is so sad Ron, what's got you so down? :( Hope everything is okay! Smile my friend, you're amazing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

It's a long story Sye. I guess I'm just feeling lonely some times.
s y e

10 Years Ago

You can PM me if you need me.
ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sye. xoxo
Aww truly heart felting and sad I liked your poem

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Aguilar.
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Loneliness doesn't last forever my friend. Someday the light will shine through and those dark days will be over.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

I know...it just takes so long to get a short distance sometimes.
How heart breaking and sad this is, I feel the longing. At least at the end you leave the reader with the faint hope that this couple will get together to ease that pain. Some times there is not even that possibility, for many. Well done.
In my usual fashion, the last word needs to be corrected to falter.
A great write Ron.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Noel. Yes sometimes there is hope...no matter how impossible it feels.
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One day at a time sugar.This is very sad makes an angel weep that it does:(

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

You apologize way too much,Your humor is fine I am a very very good angel ....ask anyone?
ron

10 Years Ago

I know you are. :)
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Lol.............:)
So heartbreaking, Ron. This is a beautiful write and the love is oozing from every word. Great job! (:

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank Madalyn :)
I am crying. Ron.... this so raw, so heartbreaking.... I hope she knows who she is... Bravo my dearest friend. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Chelsea. :)
Konigin

10 Years Ago

:) You are welcome.

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