The Wedding Night

The Wedding Night

A Poem by ron

The Wedding Night

 

 

 

After we share our vows with each other in front of the world. After the Angels have blessed our love. After the reception, and the toasts, after we get to our Honey moon suit...

 

I would slowly and carefully take off your Wedding gown, help you place it in it’s box. So it will be just like it is now when our daughter gets Married.

 

I would undo all the extra things you have on and kiss them with all of my love. I would ask you to keep on your veil and place it over your eyes.

 

Slowly I would...

Kiss your feet:...they are what walked you down the isle to me.

 

I would kiss your inner thighs:...for they will be caressing my face.

 

Then kiss just below your belly button:...for that is where our children will be for nine months very soon.

 

I would kiss your tummy and up to your n*****s:...how beautiful you feel against my lips.

 

Then kiss and nibble my way up to your neck:...I love the taste of your body.

 

Then look in your eyes and whisper:...”I do, I will, forever and ever”.

 

I would kiss your lips:..how soft they feel.

 

The slowly and with all the love I have to offer:...that my dear you will have to wait to find out until the day we are married.

© 2014 ron


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A good bit of writing Ron, the tender feelings here expressed so well. You are a die hard romantic I think.
I put up a couple of small new poems tonight, drop by for a visit. Not as sexy as this one, but the spirit is there.

Two typos, Honeymoon suitE and down the Aisle, otherwise well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Noel. I will fix them. Going to read your new pearls of romance.



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This is very cute poem... Saving the rest for marriage lol. I like the "forever and ever."

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much.
I really like this poem, it's very sweet. The ending is fun too. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you very much. I had fun writing this one.
A good bit of writing Ron, the tender feelings here expressed so well. You are a die hard romantic I think.
I put up a couple of small new poems tonight, drop by for a visit. Not as sexy as this one, but the spirit is there.

Two typos, Honeymoon suitE and down the Aisle, otherwise well done!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Noel. I will fix them. Going to read your new pearls of romance.
Oh my a perfect wedding night.Marriages start of with so much of love and hope but it takes a lot of work but if you love your partner you should be willing to remember what you felt on that special day .Very nice Red :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Yes it is Vidya, and yes it does.
I love how you leave the reader wondering what's going to happen - some might guess - but we'll never really know until you've been there... this is full of love, heart and passion, Ron.

Amazing.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sye. Well the wedding night is between the two people and not for the world to share.
s y e

10 Years Ago

Of course that's what I'm saying, you'll never know until you've been there, in that position with t.. read more
ron

10 Years Ago

This is true Sye.

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