I shall save my tears

I shall save my tears

 

 

 

These tears of joy I will save,

until you come back to me.

 

They are for the love I feel for you,

the passion in my soul.

 

The beating of my heart that stops,

when you are gone.

 

These tears of joy knew your heart,

when gently you placed your lips upon my soul.

 

You made it beat in time with yours,

you showed it how to love.

 

So until you come back into my arms,

I shall keep these tears of joy...

 

...so you may kiss me for a thousand,

years.

Reviews

[NoelHC]

Well expressed, and I can sense the depth of feeling you are writing about here. A good write, the "shall" in the title caught my eye as very few people use that anymore, and it is just so right.

[ron]

Thank you Noel. The "shall" just seemed right for this.

[s y e]

Such a gorgeous write Ron. This is something special. Just like your heart.
Beautiful little ditty for your lovely lady.

[ron]

Thank you so much Sye. You are so very sweet, and a hopeless romantic as well.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Aww you and all this sugar.Sweet true.Your lady will be ecstatic to read your lovely lined Red :)

[ron]

Aww thank you Vidy. You are so sweet to say. Thank you. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome.It is the truth I'm sure :)