The proposal for a life time

The proposal for a life time

A Poem by ron

The proposal for a life time

 

 

 

A love I did find so pure and sweet,

she took my heart and made it beat.

 

My love for her has grown and grown.

She is the light in my life when there was only the dark.

 

So I thought and thought what would I say,

if one day she would agree to marry me.

 

So this how it has played out in my head,

I’m nervous just writing this today.

 

Under the full moon so the stars could see. I would place white

feathers in the trees and on the ground (to make it look like Angels are near by watching us). Candles would be lit and our favorite song would be playing softly in the background.

 

I would get on one knee, shaking like a tree in the wind. I would look into her eyes and ask her...

“Dear sweet name inserted here you are the one who has stole my heart, you have made my heart beat, you are the one I want until the end of time. Will you name inserted here accept my hand in marriage, to have and to hold until the end of time, Will you be the last breath I take and the one who will live in my heart forever. Will you name inserted here let me be your husband from this day forward? Will you 

name inserted here do me the honor and Marry me?

 

And on that night if her answer was yes...

 

The moon and the stars would rearrange to spell out our love in the night,

so lovers around the world would know...

 

That perfect love has born one heart that very night.

© 2014 ron


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You have it all planned with eloquence and the perfect ways of romance........may it come true for you my dear friend! You deserve it!! May the angels ever smile on you and your love!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sheila. I hope in my hearts of hearts it does.
It's impossible not to say yes, it's so romantic, the angels, the imaginary so perfect. If it was me i would marry you before you even poped the question lol ... Abdolutly beautiful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

That would be wonderful if you did.
Rose Black

10 Years Ago

It would be AMAZING, but i lost all hope about it =C
ron

10 Years Ago

Don't give up Rose. It will happen.
Awww well if that isn't just the very sweetest thing.She would say yes I am sure :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

I will keep my fingers crossed for you yes ?
ron

10 Years Ago

Yes and thank you Vidya. xo
Vidya Bacchus

10 Years Ago

Welcome :)
Very soft sweet and romantic xo Winter

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Amanda xo
Wow, this is something else and something that is so sweet and full of heart. You have the kindest heart I know and all good intentions. Who ever gets to be your wife one day is a very lucky girl. And this is the loveliest proposal ever.

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Aww thank you Sye. One day I hope it comes true.
s y e

10 Years Ago

I'm sure it will. Any girl would be lucky, I've told you before. :)
ron

10 Years Ago

I know you have :)

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Added on April 24, 2014
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Imperial, CA



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