The stars will weep the moon will cry

The stars will weep the moon will cry

 

 

 

On this road, I walked through the dust of my heart,

until you began to rain my pain away.

 

Through the dark clouds of my feelings,

you showed me the light in your heart.

 

How and why you came to me I do not care,

I would have died had you passed me by.

 

My eyes once shut,

now you have kissed them open.

 

It has been so long since my heart felt.

 

Please do not break what will cannot be fixed again,

I won’t let it feel.

 

I would throw myself to the raging waves.

I would crash my heart and soul upon the rocks.

 

Never will they find me again.

 

The stars will weep,

the moon will cry.

 

The birds will cease to fly,

for there will be no wind to catch their wings.

 

Spring will forever be held back,

by the winter of my heart.

 

The sun will refuse to rise,

for how could it;

if you steal away the light.

 

You are my...

breath,

heart,

soul,

and passion.

Reviews

[Konigin]

aaawwww. Ron... You broke my heart with this. I felt the fear of loss and and the hope of love. I hope that all will turn out okay. :) I loved this. ^,^

[ron]

Thank you Chelsea. I hope it does to. To brake someone's heart is the worst crime a person could do.

[Konigin]

You are welcome. :) And that it is. I agree.

[Ambra Celeste]

I really love the title, so unique! That is what caught my attention and BLIMEY 'I would throw myself to the raging waves. I would crash my heart and soul upon the rocks.' That's harsh! But I like the expression. :)

[ron]

Thank you Ambra. :)

[AprilRN1210]

It is hard to take that leap again fearing what will be... Knowing that another break will shatter what little remains.... Absolutely stunning my friend:)

[ron]

Thank you April. Yes it is hard.

[AprilRN1210]

You're welcome Ron. Nothing worthwhile in life is easy my friend:)

[ron]

I know April. Just hard to sometimes. Always afraid to hurt again.

[AprilRN1210]

Aren't we all?

[ron]

I know for the right person I would take a chance.

[AprilRN1210]

Me too Ron, scary as it is ---the hopeless romantic in me wants to take that leap!!

[ron]

I know how you feel. I to want to take that leap...more then some even know.

[AprilRN1210]

Well just make sure that the lady is worthy... All too often people fall in love with the idea of love and it changes perceptions... You are an sensational writer and a great friend and I wish you all the luck and know I'm here if ya need me:)

[ron]

Aww thank you. Your a sensational writer also. And I'm here if you need me to.

[ms. barrie]

This is breathtaking in its poignant beauty and mystical imagery
Your pen has weaved, written in a blaze of fiery romance.
And amazing, Fluidity. This is one of my favs on here.
Thank you for sharing! :)

[ron]

Thank you Barrie. You are very kind...:) xo

[ms. barrie]

You're very welcome, and likewise!!! :))

[ms. barrie]

You know I'm a fan of your art, just slow on the uptake! :))

[ron]

Aww thank you Barrie. I never thought of my writing as art. But thank you and I'm a fan of yours.

[ms. barrie]

Aw, thank you ron...You're one of the ones
That makes this place shine much brighter!! :):)

[ron]

Your very sweet to say that Barrie. I'm just me. Thank you for your kindness.

[ms. barrie]

Just make sure you stay u...You welcome..I am grateful for
Yours :))

[ron]

I will try. And thank you for yours.

[ms. barrie]

:)))))'''''''''''''''

[Spacecadet]

The metaphors and imagery are spot on, Ron. I love the feeling behind this poem, its so powerful and romantic. Really reaches out. Definitely one of my favorite poems by you :)

[ron]

Thank you Spacecadet. :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You write with such passion it fairly boggles my mind.Lovely lines Red :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Welcome luv :)

[Brianna Brie]

Deep and passionate just the way I like it ;)

[ron]

Thank you Brianna.

[s y e]

So utterly gorgeous, Ron.... I adored this poem... everything about it, especially how you've written it and the wording.

[ron]

You make me speechless with your reviews Sye. You will steal some ones heart you know that? Thank you

[s y e]

I hope so. :) You will do the same with some lucky woman, Ron.

[ron]

We need to find someone for each other, I think the hopeless romantic in both of us is crying for some one.

[s y e]

Ha, I think so too...... ;-) remember you're looking for me. :-P NO PRESSURE!

[ron]

That's a tall order because he has to be perfect.

[s y e]

Oooooo, I am sure he will be perfect. You picked him after all and you're a dad so you know. ;-)

[ron]

Can I bring a shotgun to make sure he behaves? :)

[s y e]

Ha, you aren't coming on our date!

[ron]

No I won't but I will be close by just to make sure....;) lol

[s y e]

Ha, you, Jack and my Dad will be probably! ;-P

[ron]

Or I could ask a few favors from some people I know...wink wink. I was Military Intelligence you know.

[s y e]

Ha, between you, Jack and my Dad I think I will be in safe hands. ;-)

[ron]

Your Dad? Should Jack and I be interviewed by your Dad? Now I'm nervous...:)

[s y e]

Ha, nope. He knows you all protect me on here and I am sure he will trust you to batter the guy into a fish and fry him if he steps out of place.

[ron]

OH the one that hurts you Sye....they won't find his body...:)

[s y e]

Ha, well I need to make sure you're following me about then, don't I?

[ron]

Yes you do, but at a desecrate distance.

[s y e]

Ha, well of course

[ron]

Your so James Bond now Sye...LOL

[ron]

I think I will call you MI 6

[s y e]

LMAO! Jane Bond you mean. ;-P

[ron]

OH your right I am so sorry "Jane" LOL

[s y e]

HA! Dude, don't you make fun of me.....

[ron]

I would never do that Sye, ever.

[s y e]

You better not be or I will have Jack on you. ;)

[ron]

I don't think I want Jack after me.

[s y e]

oh no, not when it comes to me... he'd kill you without thinking. who'd have thought the innocent, romantic poet could be so evil. :P

[ron]

Yes who thought.

[s y e]

ha, but then I think you'd be like that.