Kiss of passion

Kiss of passion

 

 

 

I gave up hope that it would come,

the beating in my chest had died.

 

You came to me with gentle whispers,

asking where my heart was.

 

I didn't understand,

“my heart...what’s that”?

 

You softly touched my chest and whispered,

“the part of you that loves”.

 

My body shook my tears flowed,

“it’s been lost...I haven’t felt it I lost it so long ago”.

 

You kissed my heart,

softly it started to beat.

 

I feel to the floor,

afraid of this feeling.

 

“It shouldn't beat..What have YOU done”.

 

I looked up and saw you for the first time,

“my Angel...my Angel, you saved my life”.

 

With each passing day and each kiss you give,

my heart beats stronger,

stronger then it ever did.

 

You saved me with a gentle kiss,

of passion.

 

Reviews

[s y e]

there is no words for how utterly breathtaking this poem is.... just wow Ron. it is a great feeling when someone can bring you back to life and make you feel again.

[ron]

Thank you Sye. Yes it is and I think she (who ever she is) could do that :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Awww it is so nice when someone can bring you back to life when you thought that what you had was all there was to have.Coffee red lovely coffee :)

[ron]

Thank you for the coffee Vidya :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Huh the coffee is mine get your own lol

[ron]

Lol, I have espresso...you want some?

[Vidya Bacchus]

You wanna share ?Cool I might keep them both.I confess I am an addict lol

[ron]

You will have to come over if you want a "cup". ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ha my mother warned me about people who would invite me over for a "cup" lol

[ron]

Why it's just espresso Vidya...;)
What could a itty bitty cup of espresso lead to?

[Vidya Bacchus]

Haha .Such an innocent man aren't you ?lol

[Frieda P]

A sweet embrace on your page ron, this is tender, thoughtful and inspiring, kudos!

[ron]

Aww thank you sweet Frieda.

[Frieda P]

My favorite of yours, I could feel your heart beating on the page, my pleasure....

[ron]

Shh don't tell anyone but...it was.

[Frieda P]

Good thing, or I'd have to give you mouth to mouth hon. ;)

[ron]

Heart stopped beating...;)

[Madalyn Beck]

Wowza, Ron!! I adore this write! Simply beautiful! It's amazing what a certain special someone can do to us. You've expressed yourself beautifully in this write. Fantastic! xo (:

[ron]

-blushing- you are to kind Madalyn. Thank you xo :)