Tears of time and longing

Tears of time and longing

 

 

 

How curel time is to make us wait,

how the longing grows in leaps and bounds.

 

Dreams of you held in my arms,

and lips pressed in the shadows of my mind.

 

To feel the warmth of your heart upon mine,

to smell the scent of your thoughts.

 

These are my dreams for now,

these are what keeps my heart alive.

 

When I lie in bed at night dreaming of how you would feel,

tears run down my cheeks,

how beautifully salty they taste.

 

 I place my hand over my heart to feel it beat,

and hope yours beats the same as mine.

 

Will you let me look deeply into your eyes when we first met,

and let your feel what my heart is screaming?

 

Would you take my shaking hands in yours,

and hold it to your face to know you are no longer a dream?

 

Would you kiss my eyes softly,

so that I might see you for the first time.

 

Would you kiss my tears,

and know my love is true?

 

Do your tears run down your cheeks,

when dreaming of me?

Reviews

[Frieda P]

A tender and bittersweet read ron....I think many can relate to this one.

"cruel & tears' in the last line, it's much too sweet for simple spelling errors to ruin it....

[ron]

Thank you Frieda. I can't believe even I missed that one.

[Frieda P]

It happens, sometimes we're just to close to it to notice, since we know what it's supposed to say, I can't believe no one else did though....always a pleasure ron.

[Leslie Philibert]

Enjoy the way the phrases are paced, this has the form of both prose and poetry..

[ron]

Wow thank you Leslie.

[Shaquana Adams]

I love this. Such sweet longings. Nicely penned! :)
-QuanaWana

[ron]

Thank you Shaquana, :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I think someone is hopelessly romantic this week.What gives Mister ?This is divinely penned true :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. Hmm what gives? Why what ever are you implying...;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Me imply ?Never.I would just come right out and say it .My mouth has no filter lol

[ron]

Lol, I bet it doesn't. ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

lol..................:)

[s y e]

Awwwwwwww, this is the sweetest Ron and definitely worth giving a try especially when just beginning a relationship.

[ron]

Thank you Sye. Yes it is.