And what of the Rose Petals?

And what of the Rose Petals?

 

 

Soft and silky,

how they brush across the lips.

 

The scent of the universe,

brushed with star dust.

 

The morning dew rested softly in it’s bud,

how beautifully milky it all seems when it’s warm.

 

Brushed across the face,

like Angel feathers felt in the full moons light.

 

Pressed ever so slowly,

on my lips they caress your passion.

 

I inhale from your beauty,

with my eyes that feel your love.

 

Brushed along my chin down my neck you dream,

sighing from your touch I felt it Oh so deep.

 

Please don’t stop,

or my heart will fail to beat.

Reviews

[Ivory'lee]

utterly romantic and breathtaking.......... Do I need to say more? *Love it*

[ron]

Thank you Ivory. Your very kind.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh my dear man You are a sweetheart your words are dipped in honey hunny :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya -blushing- You are very sweet.

[s y e]

//swoon// this is utterly romantic and breathtaking..... You were making me swoon and wanting to feel loved by someone... I adore this poem.

[ron]

-blushing- you will be loved by some one Sye...I promise you will. Just have faith.

[s y e]

Fingers crossed. :) You'll be the first to know.
Whoever this is for is one lucky woman.

[ron]

I know she knows how I feel. and that is worth so much to me. My heart beats for her so much.

[s y e]

That is the cutest thing ever.... well I told you, you'd find her. :)

[ron]

I think I have Sye...:)

[s y e]

Good. Only you and her would know that. I knew it, Ron, I just knew it! :D
I'm so happy for you now.

[ron]

And what if she finds someone else? later in her life...I think I would understand...sometimes younger is better...

[s y e]

If she left you then she is completely bonkers.

[ron]

Lol you are so sweet Sye...:)

[s y e]

Just stating the truth. :P