Will you close your eyes...

Will you close your eyes...

 

 

While I softly kiss your desires,

slowly caress your body with thoughts of being so close to you.

 

Would you let me inhale you,

as I close my eyes and see you?

 

To feel every goose bumps and tingle,

with my lips burning to touch you.

 

To hold your tight while I hear your heartbeat.

Will you close your eyes and read my passion?

 

Will you close your eyes,

as our fingers lace each other?

 

Will you open your eyes and see me for the first time,

and know I have always been right here?

 

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh wow!!!!.We so easily miss what is right in front of us sometimes yes?

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. Yes sometimes we miss what is right in front of us.

[Vidya Bacchus]

We should get our eyes checked often I guess lol

[ron]

Lol. Yes maybe we should.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Lol...................:)

[Coyote Poetry]

A amazing flow of thoughts in the poem. I like the questions and the gentle tone for love in the poetry. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[ron]

Thank you Coyote. You are most kind.

[s y e]

Perfection... It is a great feeling when someone realises you're not leaving them or their side, especially a loved one. I can't tell how on point this was and what a great feeling it is...

[ron]

Aww thank you Sye, you are so sweet...:)

[s y e]

Just stating the truth to my favourite poet.

[ron]

-blushing-

[Lyn Anderson]

This poem is so spot on. To close your eyes ... sometimes it is nice when she opens them too...:)

[ron]

Thank you KL. Yes it is, especially after a very intense feeling and you see stars and then the other one comes into focus. Mmm I love that moment.