The place I once called home

A collaboration with an amazing poetess Spacecadet. Thank you Spacecadet.

The place I once called home

I Get in the car and get away

As fast as I can

From the shadows of you 

In the rear view of my mind

From the ghosts that haunt my bed at night.

You're everywhere

Memories... Skeletons of us 

Scattered all over this town

I smell your scent and feel your touch that,

Like the winds of time, are long past gone...

I pick up pace,

Keep my eyes on the road

Not the empty passenger seat,

Not the lonely gaps between my fingers

Where yours used to be...

Will I find peace in these empty roads?

Or will I find someone else I can call my home?

Reviews

[MBUYISA]

thank you very much..........i enjoyed reading your poem

keep them coming

[ron]

Thank you MBUYISA.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You guys did some great work here.This is gorgeous :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. Spacecadet actually came up with the main part of it. I just added a couple words, shes the one that put it all together.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well anyways you two done good :)

[ron]

Thank you. She has it posted to.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Maybe I should comment on her page yes.I will do that :)

[Spacecadet]

That's untrue, Ron has an equal role to play!

[Vidya Bacchus]

You both done good equally I am sure lol

[s y e]

You guys this is absolutely fantastic and definitely one of the best collaborative pieces I've read. You guys write really well together, your pens just merge. :-)

Awesome job!

[ron]

Aww thank you Sye. :-)

[s y e]

Aww, you're welcome, Ron. :-)