Waiting at the edge of moonlights glow

Waiting at the edge of moonlights glow

 

 

Waiting...waiting.

Could my heart glow so brightly if her light did not shine on me?

 

Her passion doth make my feelings light and full of joy.

I would chase a million moon sets for one moment with her.

 

She will never know of my true feelings,

for I chase her just at the edge of her glow.

 

Just for a taste of her passion,

the sound of her sigh.

 

I weep for her tears of the lovers that broke her heart and left,

still I will never let her know I chase her,

just at the edge of her glow.

 

She can never know,

for if she did she would turn back and know I was there.

 

Reviews

[redflutterby]

Passionate and romantic....a write that comes from the heart. Love this one Ron!!

[ron]

Thank you Red. Deeper then the heart Red.

[redflutterby]

Awww... you know nothing ventured means nothing gained. ;-)

[ron]

I know...:)

[Spacecadet]

So passionately romantic, Ron! Love the imagery in this one. This girls needs to turn around! :p

[ron]

Thank you Spacecadet. She would have to know I was back there for her to turn around.

[Spacecadet]

She should feel you back there, with all your burning love!

[ron]

Maybe she does but cant look back just yet.

[maria ( rose)]

I would chase a million moon sets for one moment with her..( I bet you would my friend!! This is so beautiful Ron...
-maria rose

[ron]

Thank you Maria, yes I would.

[maria ( rose)]

:) your welcome..may all your dreams come true!

[ron]

Thank you Maria, I hope so.

[Vidya Bacchus]

I think she should turn around and realize you were there all the time.Sad and sweet hunny :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya, who knows she might be doing that but waiting for the right time to allow me to come fully into her light.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You know you could be right.Women are strange and puzzling creatures .You think they are one way and they are actually a whole different animal lol:)

[ron]

I will not agree or disagree on that Vidya. I am nothing more then a man and I do not try and guess as to what woman are like. I only say yes and hope for the best.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ha so does my husband ,say yes and hope for the best I mean lol .I trained him well :)

[s y e]

You would still be shining so bright Ron, even if she did not know how you felt. You would find some way to show her how you felt and shower her with love.

[ron]

Thank you Sye. I would even if I had to wrap them in words and pretend they were for someone I have not yet to meet...I would. (Just saying)

[s y e]

Like a little present, too cute.

[ron]

Yes like little presents of my heart.

[s y e]

Awh, that's too cute Ron. I love that idea.

[ron]

Thank you Sye. :-)