A million wishes away

A million wishes away

 

 

I can feel you close to me deep inside,

but when I open my eyes your a million wishes away.

 

I close my eyes and feel your touch,

your a soft breeze caressing my cheek.

 

Your whispers sing to me,

but their a million wishes away.

 

Your eyes look into me,

seeing what I am afraid to show.

 

Your heart breaths life,

into my very soul.

 

Still you are a million wishes away,

but at night you are closer to me then my own body will ever be.

 

I close my eyes,

and you are the wish that stays.

 

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

Wishing that the one you love and need and want were close to you .A bitter sweet plea my friend .At the very least when you close your eyes she is there :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. Yes she is :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Robbie~xoxo~]

If I had a dime for every wish, I'd be rich! lol

This a very romantic notion, Ron... (sigh)

P.S. Did you mean *Cheek* in this line~ "I close my eyes and feel your touch,

your a soft breeze caressing my check." ?

[ron]

Thank you Robbie. I think a lot of us would be. Yes I did thank you.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

My pleasure, my friend. *.*

[maria ( rose)]

aww my this is so saaaaaaweet!! I close my eyes,

and you are the wish that stays.
Excellent piece!!

[ron]

Thank you Maria. :)

[maria ( rose)]

your welcome..A million wishes away..Everyone should read this!!

[ron]

Thank you. You are very kind to say so.

[s y e]

So romantic and sweet Ron. You have such sweet little sentiments. You leave me speechless.

Another wonderful write.

[ron]

Thank you Sye -blushing-