Tears that you don’t see

Tears that you don’t see

 

 

 

Take my heart.

I’m so tired, so lonely, so much more than you know.

 

Take my hand and let me follow you through your heart.

Love me as you dreamed of me.

 

If fate would have you gone,

I would cry a thousand tears.

 

I stand in the rain and watch you leave...

could your heart be so cold...

 

Do you not feel me in your soul,

do you not feel me in the places you go?

 

I hide my heart in your soul.

 I hide my self in plain sight.

 

You walk away,

put on your sunglasses,

and disappear in the memories of my love.

 

Tears flow,

I will never show them,

they are mine... not yours.

 

 

Reviews

[curvygirlrock]

wonderful poem so beautiful and well written

[ron]

Thank you very much.

[Laura Harrison]

A melancholy yet beautiful piece. Well done Ron :)

[ron]

Thank you tj :)

[WE]

"I hide myself in plain sight." love this line

[ron]

Thank you gracey your very kind.

[Justsimplyjulia]

oh tragically beautiful ron, made my heart ache. Always so talented with penning our emotions exactly how you want. Beautiful!
-Dragon

[ron]

Thank you Dragon. You very sweet. There's more emotions that I can't find the words for.

[Kitten]

Simple and well written, the emotion in these words are immense and heartfelt. Hiding your true feelings, hidden behind your "Okay" self. Great work mister Ron! A beautiful piece! :)

[ron]

Thank you Kitten. You are most kind :)

[Sharon L.H. Kelly]

"I hide myself in plain sight." Love this line. A touching and poignant write, Ron!

[ron]

Thank you Sharon.

[Ivory'lee]

Such a sad piece filled with longing......Such a shame we can have the ones we love the most....

[ron]

Thank you Ivory. Yes it is.

[Travis Gibson (poetic h..]

Great write, Ron. Powerful and captivating from line one. This really reaches in and pulls at heart strings.

[ron]

Thank you poetic heroics.

[Travis Gibson (poetic heroics)]

It was very much a pleasure.

[Madalyn Beck]

Such a sad piece you have shared with us, Ron. You have tugged at my heartstrings and slowly, one by one, they released themselves into your hands. Beautifully done. xo :)

[ron]

Wow thank you Madalyn. I will try not to break them. xo :)

[Frieda P]

So sad ron, tugs at the heartstrings. 'You walk away, put on your sunglasses' sounds as though she doesn't give a flip...we always long for those we can't have.

[ron]

Thank you Frieda. Yes we do. It was about the first girl I thought I really loved in high school.

[Frieda P]

Ahh first love, we never forget do we?

[ron]

No we don't. And she was the first one That wanted to have sex with me. I didnt because I wanted her to know I wanted to be with her because I loved her and not for the sex.

[Frieda P]

Wow you were a class act in high school, all the boys thought about was s-e-x.

[ron]

Lol. That's why I didn't want to have sex with her right away. I wanted to show her that some people want love first. I know it was silly.

[Frieda P]

How did you get to be so smart. ;-)

[ron]

I had great parents that taught me how to treat a lady.

[Frieda P]

I hope I did as good a job with my sons....

[ron]

I have a feeling you taught them not only how to treat a lady but what love really is.

[Frieda P]

That is yet to be determined, my son married very young as I did....you know how that goes...

[ron]

My brother married his high school sweetheart, then went in to the Navy (most military spouses end up in divorce) and yet they are still married and still in love.

[Frieda P]

Always good to hear a happy ending, but we both know that's not the norm these days, read the statistics....sad.