Kryptonite

Kryptonite

 

 

Kryptonite...I felt the feelings that left me alone,

you'r my Kryptonite, I can't live without you.

 

If I fall will you be there to pick me up,

could you just leave me lying on the floor bleeding from the pains you caused.

 

Your eyes pulled me in,

your lips told of a love story.

 

No...No.......no,

break me and I will be right there to pick you up.

 

Please OH please don’t throw your Kryptonite.

 

Take my heart and use my soul,

I have nothing else to give.

 

Call me in the middle of the night when he left you on the side of the road...

bleeding.

 

Your heart was all I wanted,

not your perfect looks.

 

I held my hand and you took it,

just to push it away when...

you left bleeding from your heart.

 

I gave you my dreams, my passion, a lust for all that you are.

I will never leave in the middle of the night just to make you bleed.

 

Take my hand and love...me,

I don’t have the right.

 

Kryptonite...who will it kill?

Reviews

[Hatchling]

Loved this Ron. Keep up the good work

[ron]

Thank you fluttershy. I will as long as I can.

[Laura Harrison]

An interesting piece and perfectly expressed

[ron]

Thank you tj you are very kind.

[WE]

wow out right an amazing write

[ron]

Thank you gracey.

[Justsimplyjulia]

Oh wow I sure as heck hope that someone will love me this way one day!!!! Beautifully written Ron!
:) :) :)
-Dragon

[ron]

Thank you Dragon. Yes love like this would be wonderful. Someone will love you like this, I know it...:):):)

[Justsimplyjulia]

thanks ron that is so sweet

[ron]

You are very welcome Dragon.

[Ivory'lee]

It was a bittersweet piece....pain....love....longing all in one.

[ron]

Thank you Ivory. I guess I was in an emotional mood last night.

[Madalyn Beck]

A very interesting write! The pain and love intermingled into a beautiful piece. Good job!

[ron]

Thank you Madalyn. I was listening to Three Doors Down-Kryptonite when I wrote this, so most of the credit has to go to them. Of course a few beers helped to..:)

[Madalyn Beck]

That's hilarious! I was listening to 3 Doors Down last night. Great minds over here!! :)

[ron]

Lol. And did you have a few beers to? :)

[Madalyn Beck]

I did not. I had some wine though! :)

[ron]

Yaa. I have some homemade Honey wine I will probably "quality test" tonight. I have to test the batch every so often. It sucks but some one has to do it...:)

[Madalyn Beck]

I know how that goes! My grandpa makes wine all the time and now my dad is getting into it. Guess who gets to drink most of it though? :)

[ron]

Lol. What kind of wine does he make? I want to try Sake next. I have all the equipment to make some.

[Madalyn Beck]

They mainly do elderberry, but they've done others. I'm not sure all the different types. I would love to hear how your Sake turns out!

[ron]

Very cool, most people I think try to make a red or white wine.

[Tina Louise UK]

Wonderfully expressed, a bittersweet piece, enjoyed :) x

[ron]

Thank you Tia :) x

[Vidya Bacchus]

A very different poem .Would that we could stay away from the things that hurt us.For some unexplainable reason we find ourselves back in that place over and over again.

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. I think thats what love is but I'm not sure.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Love is not something that will hurt you,or drive you away or bring you to your knees in despair.It is selfless .Just my thoughts :)

[ron]

That is true.

[s y e]

Reads like a song but maybe that is just me. This is good and expresses alot of different emotions.

Another good poem from you Ron.

[ron]

Thank you Sye. I was listening to Three Doors Down-Kryptonite when I wrote this...:)

[TheHumbledChild]

It's funny how normally being a "superman" we tend and try to stay away from
Our "kryptonite" but yet it sounds like you can't leave or live without it regardless of what it does to you emotionally....idk maybe I'm reading it wrong but regardless good poem great read

[ron]

Thank you HumbleChild. I was listening to Three Doors Down-Kryptonite when I wrote this, but you saw something in the poem I didn't see. Your right about needing the kryptonite in our life.