When I let my walls fall

When I let my walls fall

 

 

When the time is right I will let all that I am fall,

the walls that kept me prisoner, the heart not aloud to feel openly.

 

My soul will be stripped bare,

my emotions will fill oceans.

 

My feelings will make Angels cry,

all that I am will crumble and be reborn.

 

My passion will ignite the sun,

my desires will control the stars.

 

Chains of submission to this shadow I dwell in,

will burn to ashes.

 

Be careful with my heart,

do not caress it without feeling.

 

For when my love breaks free it will be a fire storm,

of all the things I have kept buried.

 

It will ravage all you feel beyond measure,

it will consume your passion and make it my own.

 

It will command all of your heart,

and love you deeper then any passion know on the face of this world.

 

It will caress your love so completely.

it will blot out the stars.

 

It will command the Phoenix,

it will not be contained.

Reviews

[s y e]

This is beeeeeutiful, Ron. :-) I loved this one, so much promises and determination. Just lovely.

[ron]

-blushing- thank you Sye, you very sweet. :-)

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is awesome hunny.Your words are filled with determination and promise.

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. xoxo :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Spacecadet]

Forgive my crude reaction, but this poem is badass! I couldn't find a better way to put it. The words exude power and strength and give us an insight into your bold and fierce side. Good job Ron! :)

[ron]

-blushing- thank you Spacecadet. I'm speechless...:)

[Spacecadet]

One little suggestion, I think you meant "stripped bare" and not "striped" in the 4th line?

[ron]

Ah ok, thank you.

[Spacecadet]

No problem!