How you fit

How you fit

 

 

Your warmth surrounds me,

how intoxicating you are.

 

I feel the pulse of your body,

as your eyes tell me what is in your heart.

 

I am hesitant to sink myself deeper,

what if I am wrong about your true feelings.

 

What if this is just for the moment,

I would be left out in the cold with no feelings.

 

Your passion drives me,

I want to feel you deeper.

 

I want to know how deeply you will take me.

 

Could you make my dreams come true?

Would you wrap all that you are around me?

 

Would you open yourself up,

and let me sink deeper?

 

A touch of your words placed softly on my heart,

makes me feel safe and loved...

 

Like two pieces that fit so perfectly,

you have stolen my heart.

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hmmm very nice buddy.Perhaps if you want something bad enough you have to take a risk yes ?

[ron]

Perhaps. But all in good time.

[Vidya Bacchus]

All in good time hmmm.People keep saying that.I wonder why ?

[ron]

When the time is right.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh hush before I whack you over the head.

[s y e]

Oh this is beautiful and so very, very romantic, Ron. You're going to make some woman very, very happy when she decides to come out from hiding. Writing all this romantic, emotional poetry is going to make her feel so loved.

Beautiful!

[ron]

Thank you Sye. I hope she does.

[Sami Khalil]

Sinking deeper and deeper makes us breathless and then we call for help from the other side to throw a life line...A splendid poem...:).....

[ron]

Thank you Sami...:) you are most kind.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome kindly...:).......................