My heart beats

My heart beats

 

 

It feels like a miracle the way my heart beats,

the way it keeps time with your love.

 

The best part of you came into my life,

and made me feel complete.

 

I never knew such a feeling could exist,

that has swept me off my feet.

 

The touch of your finger as it traces my heart,

makes me melt in your hands (I am lost).

 

Your whispers at night when we sit and talk,

makes my body feel like its about to melt.

 

I am helpless to resist you (not that I ever would).

I am held by your love, I am yours to command.

 

This feeling I have for you my sweet love,

will be shown in the stars each night.

 

The Heavens will come and they will watch as you caress my life.

 

The books they will write, the stories and poems will read...

How you loved me and showed me your sweetness,

until the end of eternity.

 

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is so beautiful hunny.Your sweetness is showing, careful lol

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. Is it showing? Darn I will have to do something about that lol

[Vidya Bacchus]

You wear it well Red :)

[ron]

Not as well as it use to be.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Really hmmm makes a girl wonder :)

[ron]

Its not a mystery Vidya. Its just that its been so long I have a hard time trying it on. But thank you for your kind words...:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Frieda P]

A heavenly romance poem ron, your bliss transferred from your pen so eloquently. This one swept me off my feet!

*exist*

[ron]

Thank you Frieda. I feel honored to be able to sweep you off your feet. Thank you I will fix the typo. :)

[Frieda P]

The pleasure was all mine. :-)

[Sami Khalil]

"The best part of you came into my life,
and made me feel complete.

I never knew such a feeling could exists,
that has swept me off my feet."

A splendid poem indeed. It sounded like a beautiful song...:)............

[ron]

Thank you Sami. Your words are always welcome.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)....................

[s y e]

This is absolutely romantic and beautiful Ron. I cannot tell you how much this touched me, you are simply a romantic at heart.

Truly magical.

[ron]

Thank you Sye. I am very happy I was able to.

[s y e]

You're just a big bundle of romance my friend.

[ron]

Lol guilty as charged.

[s y e]

Yep, you're guilty alright.

[ron]

Um...wait what am I guilty of again...blushing trying to look innocent ;)

[s y e]

Guilty of being a bundle of romance. ;-)

[ron]

Lol, I wish that were the case Sye, I really do. Pain makes us hide who we are from the rest of the world. We should never do that, but some of us have been doing it for so long it has become almost natural. Writing is the first thing I have done to poke my head out and see what I have hidden my self from for so long.

[s y e]

Don't let the pain ir your past change you. You're more than amazing, we all agree.

[ron]

Thank you Sye.