The night we met

The night we met

 

 

 

I don’t remember what the night looked like,

nor if it was chilly or warm.

 

I can’t remember what the others were doing,

or who was with whom.

 

I just remember the small things,

that were the biggest my life has explored.

 

The look in your eyes as the soft light made them glow.

How your mouth curled into a smile as you spoke.

How your hands delicately tugged at a loose strand of your hair.

How you blushed softly when you allowed me to hold your hand.

 

So many small things that night,

visit my dreams every night.

 

The smell of Jasmine in your hair.

How the light reflected softly along the edge of your ear.

 

How your neck became more subtle as you allowed me permission to look.

The beat of your heart through your shirt, (I am sorry but I could not help but look).

 

You forgave my awkwardness,

how I stumbled for every word.

 

You made me feel safe in a night I will never forget.

You might not remember.

 

But I visit it in my dreams every night,

so I can love you again and again.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

yes, the little things that we remember...but the night being chilly or cold...if it is love at first sight...if we are that taken by another...we won't really notice anything else other than looking in that person's eyes and falling in love.

another romantic gem, ron.

jacob

[ron]

Thank you Jacob. Yes it is the little things that can be the biggest feelings when first we fall in love with another.

[s y e]

Sigh...... I am quite content now. This just made my whole night, it was so sensual, loving and warm. I just loved it all, the wording the imagery - how do you do it? You write so perfectly all the time. So loving and warm, like you are embracing us with your heart and words.

This is perfection.

[ron]

Thank you so much Sye. I don't know that I'm that good. I just try to picture myself in the moment and let the words take me where ever they take me.

[s y e]

You're more than good, Ron - and you definitely take me where you want the reader to go, therefore, you're ace. To me anyway.

[ron]

Aww thank you so much Sye. Your ace's to.

[s y e]

N'awwwww :-) heehee thanks dude.