Softly wrap me in your words

Softly wrap me in your words

 

 

 

Take me to your bed of passion,

wrap me in your words of love.

 

Stroke my heart gently,

with desires dripping from your fingers.

 

Make me blush as you show me your heart.

Set my mind on fire, a fire that burns bright.

 

Let me drink from your spring,

let it quench my thirst.

 

Allow me this moment sweet lover,

to show you who I am.

 

Let me caress your sweet garden of emotion,

let me plant the seed of love deeply.

 

Allow me to bring you the moon each night,

to watch your flowers bloom in it’s light.

 

Be the strength I never knew,

the love I have never felt.

 

Allow us to become one in the passion of your words.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this heats up the page with beautiful passion...to be wrapped in words of love...what a beautiful way to live and/or die...

[ron]

Thank you jacob. Yes it is...:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are truly inspired Red this is beyond beautiful.Such awesome feelings must be very nice to feel for someone :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. Yes it is :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[kublakhan27]

Absolutely gorgeous, a love song in the purest sense...this one is destined not only for my library but for many others I'm sure :)

[ron]

Thank you so much. I am honored that you find it worthy to allow it to grace your library.

[Lydia Shutter]

Smooth and suave, your words sway as they enchant on the page, Ron! Sizzling hot, but still elegant. That is a thin line to walk and you managed to do it with panache! Romantic, passionate, sensual.....a wonderful beginning of the weekend write. Lydi**

[ron]

Thank you so much Lydia. Your words are very kind. :)

[Jack...]

Ron, this one is wow worthy. You have brought this to life very smoothly and its passion is overflowing, though not so in your face as to be demeaning. It take finesse to pull off such heat without it burning another's fingers. Woman are beautiful, delicate creatures and should be treated as such and you have done just that. To cherish her and the love you share is a special moment...enjoyed this a lot.

[ron]

Wow thank you Jack I am honored by your words.

[s y e]

Oh wow, this is sensual and very passionate write. You definitely wrapped me up in your words Ron. I didn't want this to end. You are going to have woman swooning over this one.

Woweee my friend.

[ron]

Thank you Sye, your very sweet. Not sure about that but thank you.

[s y e]

I am sure about it my dear friend, and if they don't then they have a problem. ;-)

[ron]

Lol ok I will take your word for it.

[s y e]

You should. You know you want to. :-)

[ron]

Yes your right I do :-)

[s y e]

Yay! You're just too trusting in me, ahaha.

[ron]

I don't think so. You would never do anything to me Sye, you are far to sweet a person.

[s y e]

You're right, I'd never hurt you... I would never hurt anyone, intentionally.

[ron]

No I wouldn't...:)