Give me your self and I...

Give me your self and I...

A Poem by ron

Give me your self and I...

 

 

In the light of the moon give your self to me,

and I will give you my soul.

 

My pretty fair maiden travel with me through the garden.

Come to me, me marvelous house, come to me, me marvelous house.

 

Come in the light of the moon,

take me to the market and show the world of your love, your true love.

 

Take me, your dear solder boy who fights for your love.

None shall take from what you have bequeathed me.

 

Your heart in mine,

I shall never leave you lest I die a little each day.

 

Come to me my true love.

 

Shall we walk amongst the stars,

and the life spread before our feet, the path shall show its self.

 

She took my hand,

solder boy you will find love.

 

To the moon we did walk,

in its glory we did make love.

 

By all that is bright and full of love we did live.

We must, my dear lassie love in it’s shining glory.

 

Take me to your marvelous life,

to your marvelous love that holds no bounds.

 

When I look in the light,

the light of the moon, will you be able to love me so completely?

 

And the fire burns hot and cold,

let your love burn hot, your passion cools my lust for thee.

 

Let not your heart forsake my love.

Let the house we built last forever.

Let our love shine like a beckon for all to see,

let it be the flame that draws love into its bosom.

© 2014 ron


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The sentiments you have expressed are exquisite and endearing, romantic as well as passionate!! I especially like the "old world feel" of it with the pretty fair maiden. I feel this is one of your better poems with an excellent flow of thoughts culminating in a marvelous ending verse, especially the line "let it be the flame that draws love into its bosom"!..........that line alone is worth a million smiles!
Beautiful my friend!!

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much Sheila. I have missed you. You are a fountain of wisdom and good grace. The world .. read more
Sheila Kline

10 Years Ago

I am humbled and honored by your kind words!!! Thank you my friend!!!!
ron

10 Years Ago

You are a true patron of poems and all that is written dear sweet Lady.
Nicely written Ron. Thanks for sharing


Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Than k you Fluttershy. And you are most welcome.
Hatchling

10 Years Ago

You're welcome
Let not your heart forsake my love.
Let the house we built last forever.
Let our love shine like a beckon for all to see,
let it be the flame that draws love into its bosom.
 
I absolutely love above verses,  very relateable! amazingly written and well expressed

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you A. Amos.
You have bequeathed love here with all its splendor and glory. The promises, the imagery and the sentiments are all great...:)..............

Posted 10 Years Ago


ron

10 Years Ago

Thank you Sami. Your review is a wondrous delight to read.
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

My pleasure...:).........................

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Imperial, CA



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I have been writing on and off or more years than i care to remember. I started writing poetry, than i started a novel (still in the works), now I'm writing a six part short story erotic.. more..

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