Exploring

Exploring

 

 

Feeling the universe exploding consuming,

light and gravity trapped by unseen forces.

 

Deep tremors fill the body,

as emotions loose control.

 

Just out of reach at the edge,

you can feel it pulling you in.

 

Unable to slow, unwilling to give in,

the closer to the edge you get.

 

Suddenly in a writhing furry you feel it,

building inside like an unstoppable tidal wave.

 

Breathless it starts to consume you,

relenting in its intensity.

 

Ever deeper it thrust its will in you.

Needing to control your very existence.

 

Will you give in,

could you stop it if you wanted to?

Reviews

[Madalyn Beck]

Who is the heck would WANT to stop it?! I was feeling every word you have written here and I began to crave that tidal wave! Great write! xo :)

[ron]

Wow...thank you Madalyn...-blushing-

[Madalyn Beck]

Anytime! ;)

[maria ( rose)]

nope, I will never give in. I'm like an unstoppable tidal wave. :)
Great job with this write.

[ron]

Thank you Maria. I have a feeling it would take a lot for you to give in to anything.

[maria ( rose)]

:) you know it ... your so welcome!!

[Ivory'lee]

Nope, I'd have to give in, it would be impossible to stop. :P

[ron]

I agree it would be very hard to stop.

[Vidya Bacchus]

I guess I would let the wave take me where it would.I don't think I could stop even if I wanted to :P

[ron]

I would want to see where it would take me.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Yeah me too.