Watching...

Watching...

 

 

In the distance as two lovers become one,

Oh how the moon does cry.

 

The clouds block the sunshine,

as the rain tries to wash away their essence.

 

Quietly I weep for the watcher,

wishing I could take away the pain.

 

Trembling from the fear they will find love,

from afar.

 

What could I do but watch the watcher.

 

Author's Note

Inspired by Ashley_Pietro's "Dream catcher"

Reviews

[Corset]

yes, what Lydi said so well below, so i'll just say I know how this feels and admire the way you were able to get that feeling across with your words.

[ron]

Thank you. You are most kind to say. I am very glad you read my poem.

[Lydia Shutter]

Sometimes it is impossible to help a situation even though you "feel" it and are observing it. People have to make their own mistakes and will not listen to advice unless they have experienced it themselves. So empathetic....great imagery...very well written, Ron. Lydi**

[ron]

So very true Lydia. Thank you xoxo

[maria ( rose)]

What could I do but watch the watcher. wow, this is a very moving piece Ron but well written. thanks for sharing.
=maria

[ron]

Thank you so much Maria.

[maria ( rose)]

♥your welcome my friend

[ron]

♥.........

[Daisie Vergara (Dhaye)]

There are some love stories which have beautiful ending...but there are some which have sad ending.
The ending relies not in our hands..sometimes what we can do is to watch...and cry.
Thank you for sharing this.

[ron]

Your very kind Dhaye. I agree.

[†Tracey†]

I love this. It's powerful in message but soft in approach... :)

[ron]

Thank you Tracey... :)

[s y e]

A lovely one Ron... very good and written perfectly well as always.

[ron]

Thank you Sye. I am very happy you liked my poem.

[Lyn Anderson]

Very good. Clean, concise, and to the point.

[ron]

Thank you KL. Yaa no corrections...

[Stephen]

The mixture of emotions, love n misery's dripped into the words.

[ron]

Thank you.

[Pryde Foltz]

Trembling from the fear they will find love,
from afar.

What could I do but watch the watcher.

Poignantly heart-breaking piece.

[ron]

Thank you Pryde.