Red and her whip

Red and her whip

 

 

It cracks like thunder,

it makes lesser ones tremble.

 

She wields it with authority,

she knows just how to lay it.

 

It can bring pain,

of the most wondrous feeling.

 

All who have been under it,

beg her for more.

 

I know it's masochistic to want what she delivers,

but just me dear reader, she will not disappoint. 

Author's Note

This is not my fault that I write what I do, I am possessed by the thoughts not entirely my own.

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

Haha I am with Freida on this one .I try to steer clear of redheads with whips no less lol

[ron]

Just remember Vidya I am a red head to :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh my ,I did forget that .Are you a redhead with a whip then ?

[ron]

I don't have a whip, but I want to get one. I might need some training with a whip.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh lord !!!!

[ron]

Just saying incase someone wants to teach me...:)

[Devesh]

Might I do the honours, Ron? :P

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hahaha go for it Devesh :P

[Devesh]

I'm raring to go, just need Ron's consent lol

[Vidya Bacchus]

Wow you sound like pro lol

[Devesh]

I'm still underage, mind you.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Hey "what's age gotta do with it "So i hear :)

[Devesh]

Well, in all fairness, I agree. Sadly, the law doesn't. :P

[Vidya Bacchus]

True ,true very true and maybe the law has a point there you whip master .

[Devesh]

Maybe it does. Wait, what are we talking about here? I thought you were talking about a horse drawn carriage?

[ron]

I was thinking of a woman for teaching me Devesh, sorry. And for that kind of training she would have to be at least 18. But thanks for the offer.

[Devesh]

Disappointment doesn't ever disappoint, does it? Maybe another time...*sigh*

[ron]

Sorry Detest.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You two are funny :)

[ron]

I bet you where hoping to watch weren't you Vidya...:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

You make me sound so bad :P

[Devesh]

All I wanted to do was drive a horse drawn carriage..people always misinterpret me..*sigh*

[ron]

You naughty naughty girl...:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

What !!! I am outraged ,I am an angel I will have you know .

[ron]

I'm sorry Vidya. I know how innocent you are.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ha why does that drip of sarcasm ?

[ron]

Why what ever do you mean?

[Vidya Bacchus]

Now who is way too innocent ?

[ron]

-Blushing with my halo shining bright over my head- (even if it is a little crooked)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Uh huh .I stll can't find mine :)

[ron]

I have yours tucked away in a safe place :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

I'm not sure I am brave enough to ask where lol

[ron]

I have it in a box filed away.

[Vidya Bacchus]

Wherever could my halo be ?

[ron]

Play nice little kitten and I will get it for you :)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Oh my , you promise ?

[ron]

Yes I do....;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Well then I will try to play nice but I do not know how long that will last knowing me lol

[ron]

Lol...your doing fine Vidya ;)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ummmmhmmmm :P

[redflutterby]

Bahahahaha.... you sure are freaky Ron. I owe you one...when least expect it..expect it!! ;-ppp *CRACK*

[ron]

Mmm a surprise gift, I love. Ouch

[Frieda P]

I'm keeping my big mouth shut before the redhead'd diavla comes after me, she's off her lunatic rocking horse. haha have fun kiddies! ;-)

[redflutterby]

Oh sure...pick now to hush that italiano mouth!! And I'm off my unicorn you hussy!! ;-ppxo

[Frieda P]

Ha my mamma didn't raise no dummy.....do they even have lunatic unicorn rockers? ;-P

[redflutterby]

In my world they do....just make sure you dont put out an eye!! Ha

[Lyn Anderson]

possessed eh? Hmmm, another not overt but sexual/sensual poem. I think you might have been looking for the word wields not wilds, and its is it's in this case. And isn't it masochistic? if you are the one being whipped? I could say something else, me being a p***y, and all, but I will leave it at that.

[ron]

Lol thank you KL.

[redflutterby]

Oh good lord.... you tell him Kl!!

[ron]

Not fare tag teaming me, I have feelings you know...curls up in a ball in the corner...lol -smirking-

[redflutterby]

Oh sure...like no man wants to me tag teamed...uhuh...;-ppp

[Lyn Anderson]

tag teamed by us? he wouldn't last an hour ....:)

[ron]

You never know my dear sweet Red...and it should be, "be" not me...payback lol.

[ron]

Oh I could last all night, as I screamed and moaned from the torture you two could inflect...:)

[Lyn Anderson]

You do know cat's tongues are rather rough ...:)

[redflutterby]

Lmao...in your dreams Ron!! You wouldnt last five minutes. ;-p

[ron]

That sounds delightful KL. I think I have lasted more then five minutes already...;)p

[Lyn Anderson]

This is deteriorating rapidly ...:)

[redflutterby]

Ha....tmi Ron...tmi!!! ;-pp

[ron]

If this is to much I will tone it down Red.

[redflutterby]

Lmao....dont be a goof!! ;-p

[ron]

Woo whooo she let me be myself...just remember Red you let me be me....:)