The lines of your passion

The lines of your passion

 

 

Deep in your valley,

lies a river of passion.

 

Its emotions soar to meet the clouds of desire.

It’s river, a raging force making all who drink from it conform to your needs.

 

How softly the whispers of your breeze touch my heart.

The landscape of your curves hide hidden treasures, not easily given up.

 

The sunset of your sighs are painted with wide brush strokes,

stroke after stroke reveling hues of energy and calm.

 

Passively you wait,

willing unsuspecting suitors to taste from your valley of passion.

 

Your lines of passion paint love in obscure reality.

The colors would make the most beautiful sunsets blush with envy.

 

Nature would come to bask in your glory.

How perfectly divine is are the lines of your passion.

 

Reviews

[.Em.]

How passionate :) . Beautiful imagery! This poem has captured the beauty of nature along with the beauty of sex. It was a great read. My only critique would be that the word passion was repeated too often at the end. But maybe I'm missing your intentions in doing so. If so I apologize. My favorite lines " The sunset of your sighs are painted with wide brush strokes, stroke after stroke reveling hues of energy and calm." This was great!

Thank you for sharing

Em

[maria ( rose)]

aww just beautiful!! thanks for sharing :)

[ron]

Thank you maria :)

[maria ( rose)]

your welcome! and thanks for the add :)

[ron]

Your welcome.

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Oh...my... goodness...

I think this is your best, Ron!

It's simply Breathtaking!... You truly paint the most divine picture of her essence...

I enjoyed every whispered line... it is intoxicating!~xoxo~

[ron]

Thank you Robbie, you are always kind with your reviews. ~xoxo~

[Robbie~xoxo~]

It's my pleasure, my friend. ~xoxo~:)

[Vidya Bacchus]

Ohhhh my ,This is lovely :)

[ron]

Thank you Vidya

[Vidya Bacchus]

You are welcome :)

[Sami Khalil]

The title was unique. The poem was soothingly wonderful...:)..............

[ron]

Thank you Sami...:)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).......................