What it feels like

What it feels like

 

 

Sometimes it feels intense beyond words.

Sometimes it feels numb and uncaring.

 

It will take you up and down,

rushing life as it goes by.

 

It will make you sweat with anticipation,

or won’t do anything for you at all.

 

It will make your heart beat faster,

or calmly beat slowly.

 

The anticipation is killing me...

its getting harder to concentrate.

 

What is this thing, the feeling I am trying to describe?

Why its you when you control my every thought.

 

When you play with me like a puppet.

sitting on the edge of my seat, waiting for your reply.

Reviews

[Vidya Bacchus]

This is lovely to me I think.You really write your poems with so much feeling.

[ron]

Thank you Vidya. I try.

[Vidya Bacchus]

You really do don't you lol ? You are welcome :)

[ron]

Yes I do. Thank you Vidya.

[Vidya Bacchus]

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