From her lips to my blushing heart

This was written in answer to a challenge from one of the woman here at WC.

From her lips to my blushing heart

 

I walked in and something about her caught my eye.

I never thought this would happen to me.

 

As I took my seat I began to feel drawn,

to her lips she was wetting with the tip of her tongue.

 

She did it so slightly, I guess she didn't know,

that some one took notice of how wet they had become.

 

She looked at me through her lashes so soft,

my body suddenly blushed, even down to my soft spot.

 

I squirmed just a little but it was enough to make her rouse,

she got up and walked over, erotically she sat down.

 

I tried not to notice her toes slowly pressing up higher.

I gasped a short breath and closed my fluttering eyes.

 

I felt her finger press against my lips,

“This is a kiss from between passion and ecstasy” was all she had said.

 

I could smell her scent, I inhaled her deeply,

I looked in her eyes and told her “I have never felt this deeply.”

 

She smiled and whispered “You are the first...

woman I ever wanted.”

Author's Note

The challenge was...
I have a challenge for you. I want you to write a poem from the point of view of a women either to a woman or woman to man.
I chose a women to a woman.

Reviews

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Surprise... Surprise!!!
Way to rise to the challenge..
Very Steamy, Ron!

Nicely done! :D

[ron]

Thank you Robbie. I tried to put my self in the moment, is that strange?

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Not strange... Well done!

[ron]

Thank you Robbie.

[MandaBear]

Very clever I must say. I really thought you did a great job at this. Great write as always Ron =)

[ron]

Thank you Amanda =) That means a lot to me.